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Reviews for The Key to My Heart

By : JadeHeart
  • From ANON - Brittany on December 12, 2005
    Very Good, as always. This is killing me, its so horribly sad. You just cry for Yuki, Shuichi just has to remember him! And soon. Although I have to probably agree with a few people, Im not much of an Annette Fan. She'd probably be fine if she wasnt going out with Shuichi. And poor Yuki, I would have died if I had to sit with both of them through their public displays right in front of him. I really want to see how this will turn out, and soon!
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  • From KaySan666 on December 12, 2005
    I realy love this story. my heart it always beating madly when im reading this story.
    BUT
    I wouldnt have said it like A.S. but its the truth... the story is dragging. After i read that his family and his friend are coming over i thought that one of them would give away the truth, not on purpose but it would slip. I thought maybe Ryuichi would tell him in his crazy-like-a-nut way that Shu is the lover of Eiri.

    I realy like how you focus on the emotions of the characters but sometimes its just too much. I know that Anette is afraid to loose Shu but did she realy think she could keep him forever? he has Amnesia for gods sake, sooner or later his memorie would have returned. I dont know the right word.. but i dont think its ... fair... to start a relationship with someone who lost his memorie. Shu only knows Anette and trusts her BECAUSE she is the only thing he knows...(does that make sense???) She started a new life with him regardless of him leaving his other life behind.

    PLEASE dont make the story toooooooo long. Cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - A. Lafaye on December 12, 2005
    wow...well not really wow. just...interesting. they're so close but so far. and poor yuki! i keep waiting for him to loose control and tell shuuichi or for shuuichi to have a flashback about their relationship. but you keep swinging them back from it! its so frustrating but wonderfully so. keep up the work!
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  • From ANON - A.S. on December 12, 2005
    This story is dragging horribly. The longer this lie goes on the less I want to read the fic. Having Shuichi's family and friends come over and flat-out lie to him is absurd, and getting him his own apartment to fuel the deception is even more stupid. I'm trying to say onaboard with this story, but I don't know how much longer I can hold on waiting for something to happen. It's getting really boring...
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  • From MariaBubbia on December 12, 2005
    AGGH! WHEN WILL HE REMEMBER! Holy poop. The angst is sooo good. I love Vulnerable!Yuki. It's great. How much longer till Shu remembers? I don't think poor Yuki (or I ^_^;) can take much more!
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  • From LustrousJade on December 11, 2005
    I like. I like! Please update soon, pretty please. I really like these Shuichi gets an amnesia and Yuki is all crazy to get him back stuff. The desperation and logining is just heart aching. And I'm longing for an update. Goodluck!
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  • From ANON - Citizen Cobalt on December 10, 2005
    What the hell happens next? This story is depressing me so much! I nearly cried! But I must keep reading! Annette must die! Poor Yuki! ARRRGGGGHHHH! Please update! Annette must die! A horrible, painful, bloody death! Yes, definitely. And Yuki and Shuichi will get back together. Oh, I'm so distraught now. Please update!
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  • From ANON - RyuichiSakuma2 on December 10, 2005
    I LOVE YOU. I LOVE THE STORY.
    Let's party! ~Oooh how I hate that little bitch, Annette! Steeling Shuichi away from poor Yuki. -tear-
    Oh so angsty~

    -Ryu
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  • From ANON - Ultimecia029 on December 09, 2005
    As usual another brilliant chapter!!! I swear your writings have become my new anti drug. I cannot say how much I love this story (although I keep trying!) But one thought kept popping into my head while reading about Yuki and Shuichi's views on telling the truth: Sometimes truth is stranger than fiction. I await Annette's reaction when (and if) she hears the real story behind Yuki and Shuichi's true relationship. I'm sorry she's a nice character,but she's a hinderance to Shuichi and Yuki getting back together.I wonder if he'll throw something at her during their meeting?? THAT would prove to be interesting.......
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  • From Reyn on December 09, 2005
    y'know, at this rate Yuki's gonna be coughing up blood again and it'll be all Shuichi's fault and if Shuichi doesn't get his memories back while Yuki is slowly dying in the hospital, I'm gonna cast my vote for thwaking him upside the head to make him remember!!
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  • From ANON - Danielle on December 08, 2005
    Awwmygod. -screeches in agony-

    How much torture does Yuki-san have to go through in one looong, painful, sit-in? It's terrible!! I'm writhing with anticipation... I had doubted a great deal that you'd update again in the time I'd read it till now, but you HAD! And...man. Yuki is in for a scare of his life. Maybe the secret of unlocking Shuichi's amnesia is Yuki kissing him! That would be romantic, and perfect! Man, I hope that's what your planning - but if it is, don't tell me I want to guess!! =) I love this story, please don't kill Yuki with so much jealousy. I feel empathy towards Yuki (him being my favourite character) and I feel all of the horrible feelings that he is when he hears about Annette or thinks about how Shu doesn't know...

    ;-;
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on December 08, 2005
    AAAA!!!! This is so frustrating. Annette seems like a nice enough person but I want her gone. Gone far far far away. I can understand why Yuki would lie, it might be different if one of them was a woman but their not. Shuichi, being with Annette, probably thinks he's straight. I remember from the series he had a few problems in the beginning of their relationship (though he got over it fairly quickly) so Yuki probably wouldn't want to spring it on him that not only was he with someone (so he's sort of a two-timer) but he was also in a relationship with a man. Though I hope that his family or somebody comes and tells Shuichi or he remembers soon. This story makes me sad and I want them back together. But thank you for updating so quickly, if you didn't it would drive me nuts waiting to find out what happens. But I still want Annette gone, far far away. I don't even want them to stay friends, I just want her gone. I think I'm with Yuki on this one:) Anyways update soon, I love your story.
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  • From ANON - the soul on December 08, 2005
    Good chapter please keep going....
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  • From ANON - chocho on December 08, 2005
    You know, I've got to be honest. I'm starting to agree with Eiri. I am getting a little sick of Annette myself. I don't know why, truthfully. She seems like a very nice girl, but still....
    And I also agree with Eiri on another issue. He really is a moron! And he calls Shuichi the idiot? Ya know, if he doesn't say something to Shuichi soon, someone else will. I mean, come on! Mrs. Shindou has just a big a mouth as her son. I don't know about you, but hereing something from someone else rather then straight from the horses mouth just makes things ten times worse. Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - stupid little fan girl on December 07, 2005
    I'm not much of a reveiwer, but I thought I would review your story because you are one of my favrite authers. I really love this story and I hope my reveiw tells that your a very good writer and to keep writing. Any spelling error are the reader amusment.


    P.S. stupid little fan girl
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