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Reviews for The Key to My Heart

By : JadeHeart
  • From ANON - Danielle on November 12, 2005
    Ooohhh jeez. I feel incredibly bad for Yuki... I really, really, really, really, really, really REAAAALLY hate Annette. @@; She makes everything so much harder on Yuki. It would be one thing if it was a boyfriend, but a girlfriend; that's the ultimate low. !!;
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  • From Reyn on November 11, 2005
    wah! I don't remember this 'New York inci- oh. wait. The fight. I'm dead tired, so please excuse my flakiness.

    For some reason after I read this chapter I had the song 'Crash' by the Dave Matthews band going through my head. Tohma's insight never fails to amaze me. The power he holds is almost scary. Yuki's lucky to have him on his side. Very very lucky.
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  • From Reyn on November 11, 2005
    (jest realized that was like the world's longest review) eh heh...sorry about that. Guess I got carried away ^_^ But your story is so awesome that I can't help myself! Oh! And I apologize for not emailing you back (at least, I don't think I did). I've been falling way behind on my emails lately because I keep checking them when I'm busy. LoL.
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  • From Reyn on November 11, 2005
    Trying to protect her from Yuki's animal magnetism!! Mwahahahaha! LoL. Jest kidding.

    I understand the whole busy schedule thing (Is currently overworking self with a million and two things) so I'll forgive you for not updating daily like you used to ^_^

    A few things occured to me while reading this chapter and I was wondering if they've crossed your mind as well. The first is the fact that Yuki's the one there in the first place. He told Shuichi that his best friend is back in Japan still and that he only knew Shu through Tohma (or was it the band? it's late, my mind doesn't work anymore). So why would HE be the one looking for Shuichi and not Hiro or maybe a member of his family, or even his entire band (crazy manager and all)? I don't know how much brain power you plan on giving Shuichi in the story for this little insight (cuz Shu can be pretty deep when he wants to be), but it crossed my mind, so I thought I'd point it out.

    The second (which I'm sure we'll find out eventually) is what Annette's reaction will be when she actually meets Yuki, or at least sees Yuki and Shuichi together. I mean, Yuki already oozes that god-like untouchable status that she got a peek of when Shu was singing, so will she go all breathless when (or if) she meets the blond?

    I know there were a few other things on my mind about this story, but I can't remember them at all anymore. Maybe the next update, ne?

    Oh! And I've got that little ipod oneshot almost done. I had to stop writing it cuz midterms took over my life.rI conveniently stopper right at the start of the smut too. I don't know where the smut came from, but it sort of inserted itself in there and now I need to figure out how to get the story back to the ipods....LoL.

    best friend. annette's reaction.
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  • From ANON - Danielle on November 10, 2005
    *wails* You're KILLING me. Every time I read this story I get big, bad, butterflies; just like the ones Shuichi described. I hate Annette!! @_@
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  • From ANON - Aurora on November 10, 2005
    YAAAAAAAAAAAAy!!! You updated. I'm so happy. Can't waite for the next chapters. I was starting to think you were going to stop, that happens everytime i find an awsome story. glad you didn't> Hope you get more inspiration soon. I'll be waiting> Man your so Awsome.
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  • From ANON - chocho on November 10, 2005
    I don't know who has it the worst. Eiri or Shuichi. And what about poor Annette? Jeeze. I hope things work out for the best. Whatever that may be.
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  • From ANON - Aurora on November 08, 2005
    Please update. Your killing me with suspense Lol. can't waite to see what you do next and looking forward to it.
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  • From ANON - Danielle on November 05, 2005
    No new chapters. =((((
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  • From Reyn on November 04, 2005
    Hey Hey! I have a question! You're little thing about Shuichi owning more than one ipod totally inspired me to write out this idea I now have stuck in my head, and I was wondering if it was alright if I went ahead and borrowed that little quirk to do so. Credit will naturally be given to you and I'll totally encourage those of my fanbase who like Gravitation (I mostly write Harry Potter fics) to go and hunt your story down.

    I won't post the story without your permission, so get back to me on it!
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  • From ANON - Danielle on November 03, 2005
    Yay! You've updated already. I'm so happy. Arrrg, I love Shuichi. This Annette is... making me angry. I can imagine how Yuki feels!
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  • From ANON - Reyn on November 03, 2005
    LoL. First you take a break from updating, now you're updating like crazy! (not that I'm complaining)

    I'm glad Annette's there to at least ease Shu's fears away about contacting his family. Hopefully when Shu talks to Yuki tonight he'll remember a bit more by jest hearing Yuki's voice over the phone. And hopefully Yuki will be over his hangover by then.
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  • From eclipsingshadows on November 03, 2005
    You are wickedly good at drawing out a story line. Too good.
    But all in all its going very well. There is a lot of hurt going around on account of Shuuichi's amnesia. Poor Yuki. And I think's becoming clear to Shuuichi's girlfriend that there is just too much goodness and divinity in Shuuichi for her to keep him. Not that Yuki deserves him either but he's getting better.
    Keep up the good work.
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  • From Reyn on November 03, 2005
    wah! Poor Yuki! For a second there I was worried he was going to lose control like he did back in New York. I'm glad he didn't tho.
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  • From ANON - maplecherry on November 03, 2005
    You have to continue fast! I'm like on the edge of my seat here...
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