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Reviews for Three Times A Charm

By : JadeHeart
  • From ANON - brit Columbia on February 02, 2006
    I know you have a life and all, but could you PLEASE hurry up and post chapter 16? Otherwise I'm going to be checking every five minutes like some kind of addict! It's hard to be patient. Sigh. What's that Ryo thinking? Four months, well five and a half now, with no sex and only one declaration of love at the very beginning? That's no way to do a relationship. I hope Diana is going to scold some sense into him. This story is lovely. I can't wait to read the other things you've written. I'm so glad I found you. More, please!
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  • From ANON - Brit Columbia on February 02, 2006
    I'm about to start chapter 10 and I cannot adequately express how much I'm enjoying this story! Dee and Ryo are perfectly in character. ( I SO want to smack Ryo) You have a real talent for writing unique sex scenes. They are very descriptive and beautiful. Thank you for doing this for all the bereft Fake fans out there, and please don't ever stop writing.
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  • From ANON - Jessie on January 28, 2006
    Really love the story!! Keep up the great work. Please let me know when you are goingto be finished with the next chapter. THANXS
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  • From ANON - sumblink2 on January 19, 2006
    OMG!!! That was soo hot and yet sad that Ryp did it my himself, why can't he see that his ass really needs him and just, just be together again!!! Please Update soon! I love the story still!!! :)
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  • From QueenB on January 19, 2006
    Ch. 15 *WHUMP* Excuse me, that was the sound of me falling on the floor. I'm okay now.

    Gee, I hope Bikky wasn't there to hear all that. Makes me wonder why Ryo was so worried about Dee staying over if he's making that much noise by himself.
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  • From QueenB on January 19, 2006
    Ch. 14 Heh. I liked this chapter. It was funny and sweet and Ryo's worry didn't seem forced. Oops! Out of time!
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  • From QueenB on January 19, 2006
    Ch. 13 It's not like to be so introspective. I like it although I'm not sure I like him being so cautious with his feelings. That feels a bit off for him. But at least he's trying to think things through. Unlike what he was thinking before, you need more than love to make a relationship work; otherwise people wouldn't ever get divorced.

    I guess Ryo and Dee are both going to have to make adjustments. Even though they're apart, they're trying to make sense of it all. The conversation here seems so natural, with the awkward pauses and changes in mood right on target. I'm going on to the next chapters before I run out of time here at the computer.

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  • From QueenB on January 19, 2006
    Ch. 12 "That was when he realized that he really did need some time to himself to think properly, to step completely back from the situation, distancing himself from his emotions, and look at it with clear eyes. Only then, would he find the answers to those questions." Hey, good for him! I hope he'll keep in touch with Ryo while he's gone though.

    The rose is a good touch. It reminds me of one of my other recommended fics "Saying it with Flowers." That's an M/M story too from the Buffy the Vampire Slayer genre. I liked the inclusion of this lost art form here. :)
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  • From QueenB on January 19, 2006
    CH. 11 Boy, sometimes Dee just annoys me. He really is a selfish jerk. And his mood swings are intolerable! One moment he's displaying chilly silence and the next he's screaming like a kid throwing a tantrum. Ryo really is an angel to put up with that.
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  • From QueenB on January 19, 2006
    Ch. 10 Nice to see that Dee's finally understanding Ryo a little better.
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  • From QueenB on January 19, 2006
    Ch. 9 Thanks for updating this story. It was a bit of a jump between the action at first but I thought it was a good choice. Right now, Dee and Ryo are both sending each other mixed signals and that's going to make for a lot of emotional and dramatic tension. The car chase was nifty too.
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  • From ANON - bishigurl345 on January 18, 2006
    wow. that was hot. Considering who was the focus of Ryo's Solo act, I am surprised that he has held out this long. I love the time you are taking in exploring their realtuionship. I am glad it s long becasue it gives tiem fore the characters to develop. I loved the little grape attack in the begining :) it was beyond sweet. I hope Dee hasn't done anything that will jeporadize him nad Ryo gettingback together, I donr' want the fact ath Dee may be seeing some girls to cause a misunderstanding between him and Ryo, thus making them spend more time apart.
    Hopefuly Ryo will be ready to start his and Dee/s relaitonship up for real soon. Its a very good stoy and a look foreward to reading more from you.

    Oh and in regards to Ryo's performance...I hope that Bikky wasn't home, and if he was I hope the apartment's walls are thick ;)
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  • From ANON - Himeko on January 18, 2006
    Awwww.....Ryo! Please keep writing! Your new chapter was awesome!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on January 18, 2006
    oh man, can you say *hot*
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  • From ANON - Lin on January 18, 2006
    I.NEED.THE.NEXT.CHAPTER!!!!! NOW.PLEASE! ^^ Dee seeing women from work? Oh my, oh my... This is not looking good... And I think Dee should tell to Ryo what he trully feels and thinks. And the same goes for Ryo. Those two are just keep everything for themselves and thus all the problems are jumping out. Alhtough I do understand both of them... What an agony!! *suffering from anciousness and pain while waiting for the new chappie*
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