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Reviews for Three Times A Charm

By : JadeHeart
  • From QueenB on December 28, 2005
    Sweetie, not to be pushy here, but it's been over three weeks. When are we going to see an update of this hot, smoking, tender, passionate love story? Hmmm? Inquiring minds want to know! :D
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  • From QueenB on December 20, 2005
    Ch. 8 I'm not surprised Ryo is still hesitant. Unlike Dee, he hasn't had years to come to terms with his sexuality. Reading the "Fake" novels I often felt disturbed by Dee's pushy, overaggressive behavior, behavior that would have been termed on- and off-the-job sexual harrassment. It's no wonder Ryo got jumpy and nervous around him. (Although, from what I've seen in other yaoi magazines, such behavior between semes and ukes is pretty standard.)

    It was also frustrating to see Dee asking about Ryo's feelings but only in relationship to himself. It was always, "How do you feel about ME, Ryo?" "Do you like ME, Ryo?" "Are you thinking about ME, Ryo?" And then he'd sulk or pout if Ryo wasn't as forthcoming as he'd like. Geez, was he self involved! So in my opinion, it doesn't matter if Dee thinks Ryo should acknowledge their relationship; it's now up to Ryo to do so. Dee can have as many talks with Ryo as he wants. But it's ultimately Ryo's decision. He's brought him to his surrogate parents. That in itself is a big step. Screw Dee's hurt feelings for a change. Let him think about what coming out means to his partner.

    That being said, I really love your story; the above is my personal opinion not critique of your writing style or how you choose to take the plotline in future. (The sex is smoking!!)
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  • From ANON - KaraQ on December 13, 2005
    ...That's SO sad. I sort of want to give Ryo a good kick in the butt. It takes two to make a couple, dammit!!! :-( No wonder Dee is insecure.
    Oh, PLEASE let this have a happy ending. ^^
    I really enjoy the different p.o.v's on the situations. Really well wriitten, so keep up the good work! :-D

    ~KaraQ
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  • From ANON - QueenBoadicea on December 13, 2005
    Ch. 2 I only discovered the "FAKE" series recently and thought it was one of the hottest things I'd ever read. To think that I've been missing this for so many years! Yaoi rules! Anyway, your story carries on from the end of the series very nicely, getting the characters down in a few words and the sex and sexual fantasies are totally hot. I'm going to try to get back to this story and review it soon but I've only got three minutes left at this computer. Toodles! :P
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  • From ANON - Tusuke Kounami on December 13, 2005
    That is so not fair! LOL I was really enjoying this and still am. I am really and truly blown away, as to how well written and descriptive this is. I feel as though I am really there witnessing every detail. Very erotic in a... uh, sensual kind of way! You've successfully managed to stay true to the characters original personalities, which I've noticed not many people can do, when writing fanfiction. 5 stars from me! Plz keep up the amazing work and I look forward to your updating very soon. TK- Tusuke Kounami
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  • From ANON - telluli on December 13, 2005
    You are A FAKE FANFICTION GOD!!!!!
    I am so envyous of you. How can you write this well? Really, how?
    Thank you so very much.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on December 09, 2005
    oooh! cliffhanger!! Do you know, i've never even read this story adn clicked on this by mistake adn now i'm definitely gonna read it b/c it sounds great! love the story- well written ect.
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  • From ANON - dazz on December 07, 2005
    Well Ryo is really mean!!!!!!!!!! =(.... If I was Dee I surely have dumped Ryo a long time ago. He is hurting Dee so much....


    Anyway, this story is so cool I have enjoyed every chapter please write more =)
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  • From ANON - danya on December 06, 2005
    Hey great story!
    I hope you update it soon!
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  • From ANON - Franknfurter on November 30, 2005
    It's really amazing to read your stories.
    I enjoy every line of it! You perfectly describe the feelings and actions of the charakters, I'm waiting for more!
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  • From ANON - Neko Kate-Chan on November 25, 2005
    I love this story! It's so... so... I was going to say "cute" but that's not the word... Anyhow, update!
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  • From ANON - dazz_teddybear on November 23, 2005
    Awww I feel so sad now =( I love Dee so much because he´s energetic and he´s always smiling... Ryo is not fair at all with Dee, he needs to open himself more. I want a hot sexy scene between these two before Dee gets more hurt!!! PRETTY PLEASEEEEEEEEEEE
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 19, 2005
    Well, Dee does have a point. Maybe Ryo didn't mean to say I love you and doesn't feel as strongly for Dee as Dee loves him. If so, Dee would be right in ending now that later when it will really hurt to let Ryo go. He's hurting now I know, but why should he have to wait around for Ryo to finally realize the depths os his feeling for Dee? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - kougitenrai on November 19, 2005
    I love your story so much! It's really hard to come by such in-depth detail and plot. Your story is wonderful. I hope you keep writing and I look forward to reading more.
    kougitenrai
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  • From ANON - Kage on November 19, 2005
    Aaw, poor Dee. Don't end it, Dee! No! The poor, poor man. They really need to get alone together and fix this mess soon.
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