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By : TaintedDesire

From ANON - Catie on December 27, 2005
DOn't you dare abandon it!! I love it!! Take some time to get back into it if you need it and don't listen to stupid flamers who don't even give criticism that helps

xoxo
Catie
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From ANON - the soul on December 26, 2005
Thank-you for posting a new chapter, I love reading the story I find it very interesting and worth the time and effort it takes to write it....your a very talented writer..slow post only make reading the story that much better get to refresh your memory on the greatness of a story lol....thank-you again...
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From ANON - tsuki on December 26, 2005
I've gotta tell you that your story is fantastic.So, just ignore those flamers and tell them to fuck off.Seriously,if they hate your story,then don't bother flaming.Tell them to shut the fuck up till they can write a better story than yours.Or ask them to write a story in Japanese.Let's see how perfect their story can be.Your English is fine.Nobody's perfect.Even i'm foreign,and i don't speak good English.Take your time writing the next chapter,the wait is worth it.But,don't kill Shuichi,or i'll kill you!!Lol.Just kidding.And please,finish the story,don't abandon it.Oh,and congratulations on your father.This was the perfect timing for an update,a Christmas and birthday present in one.^_^Good luck with your next chapter.I'm hoping for a happy ending for this story*i'm hinting*Take care and merry christmas!
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From ANON - RSlover on December 25, 2005
Hey there I just wanted to let you know that your story is awesome and whoever is sending flames can fuck off and die and burn in hell because they have no frikin right to be talking to you that way so to all the people who does the flaming CAN FUCK OFF as for you the author of this story take as long as you need because an author who takes breaks on stories are the best ones because they make sure the story is good and such just please promise me that this story will have a happy ending for Yuki and Shuichi thanks muches your story rocks and so do you merry christmas ^-^
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From ANON - C4NDYP4NTS on December 25, 2005
How about you just ignore those idiots that are writing all those dumbass flames to you. Firstly, I myself am foreign, but I came to this country and know better english that most Americans will EVER know. Therefore, I understand some of the mistakes you're making from japanese as the language transfers over. If they said that they can't understand your writing sometimes, they are just stupid, because I understood it just fine. Maybe it's them that need to be taking extra English lessons. Furthermore, first they complain about you sucking at writing, but them they complain that you take over a month to update. This can only mean two things: a) while they have to be little bitches and complain about your story, they really do like it because you DO have talent, and your story IS very engaging, but they're too proud and insecure to actually admit that; and b) again, the story is actually very good, but their lives and so stupid and insignificant that they have to take it out on the foreigner to make themselves feel better. I have never seen such a blatant attack of racism in my life. It is people like them that give the U.S. a bad name, and it is disgusting. As for you losing inspiration, that's just impossible: your story is too promising. Why not using what these illiterate little punks are saying and turn it into anger. Then use this anger to make Eiri beat the shit out of Tohma or something :). Please contact me if you actually need help with motivation and everything, I love this story: the name I have given is my AIM screen name.
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From ANON - BTDTGTT on December 25, 2005
Been there, done that, got the t-shirt. There's always some ill-mannered jerk who has to open his big mouth and make a creator's life miserable.

Whoever is responsible for that email should learn the difference between you're and your before he/she begins to insult someone else's grammar. Could your grammar be better? Of coursel I have yet to read A SINGLE POSTING ON ANY FF SITE by any author of any nationality that couldn't benefit from a good sound whipping from a copy editor. So what? FF is written by amateurs and never sees real copy editors.

Your story has a real charm, and what better way to practice a second language than by trying to do something as difficult as writing fiction? I'm personally trying to learn Japanese right now, and I'm telling you, I'm seriously impressed with your command of the English language.

I'm also charmed by your account of your time with your father and his reactions to your stories. How wonderful to have a parent with whom you can share this part of your life.

I know it's difficult, but writing past difficult moments is all part of writing. Speaking from experience, I'd suggest you try very hard to finish the story . . . no matter how long it takes. Don't let the bastards win, and give your characters the benefit of a resolution. Your muse will thank you for it!
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From ANON - Travellyr on December 25, 2005
...what jerks. Whether it's one person or one dozen, I'm sorry people are being so horribly rude to you. If they don't like something, they shouldn't read it. Whether you give up on the story or continue it is your decision, but I want you to know that I like it. Your English is fine. It's not perfect, but it's fine, and it's better than the writing of several native English speakers, including one of my roommates. Your ability to tell a STORY, to string together plot and characterization, is better than the writing of BOTH my roommates. I like your story enough to check back, and check back, and check back, and to read it whenever I see it. I like it enough to read it even though I usually don't like this sort of story... life is usually complicated enough without reading about fictional people's angst. ^^;;

Congratulations on your father, and on you. I hope you have a very, very merry Christmas.
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From ANON - ~})i({~ on December 24, 2005
iggy the stoopid flamers! they dun o a good story when they c 1!!!! :) if that cant look past errors in the story then they should just stfu n lv... im glad u finally updated! n it did take a long time but im sure u have been bzy... i am 2 *sighs* stoopid life! *kicks it* NE WAYS! have a great christmas!!!!! and plezzzzzzzz update soon?!? i realllllly wanna kno wat happens!!!! again ty 4 the story! tc!!!

**mandi**
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From ANON - Bookworm51485 on December 24, 2005
Yea, I would ignore that email. Obviously they like your story if they're so desperate for an update that they'd email you. It's like they're trying to insult you into an update. Anyways your story isn't bad, my advice would be to get a beta for the grammatical problems you have. It doesn't make the story unreadable, but it would be better without them. So yea, I hope you do keep writing despite the nasty emails your getting and I hope to see an update whenever you have one. I can understand having a life, I'm a beta, I don't even have to come up with anything to write, but I still find myself having trouble finding the time to sit down and edit the chapters. So yea, can't wait to see how the story goes and whether or not there is still a baby.
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From ANON - Bloody Doll on December 24, 2005
You HAVE to continue this story!! Whaah, don't stop it, please please please!!!
You're a great writer, don't care about some stupid flames!!

SO CONTINUE, no matter how long it takes to write a chap or two, okay?

I love this story and I think that many people do! ^_____^

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From ANON - kagomegirl on December 24, 2005
oi! those ppl are just plain mean. gah i think your doin fine. tell them that if they dont like it they can just not read it. simple as that. its a free access and your not forcing them to read it. if they dont like it they should just ignore it and walk away. it just goes to show that they have never written anything good if they wrote anything at all and dont understand the hard time we authors have at writting things. they should be grateful your even gracing us with your ideas. so dear be at peace have a happy holidays and i do wish you the best of luck. also if you have trouble getting some ideas here is some helpful advice i got from a close friend; look to the readers who truly enjoy reading this fic ask them for ideas and help. also if you have problem with grammar dont sweat it firstly use a word processing program to check your work and then see if anyone would like to give you help and be a beta-reader who will correct any mistakes before it's posted. i do hope you continue and goodluck with everything. hugs!!
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From pandorazellas on December 24, 2005
Flamers fucking suck! Never ever listen to them! It seems these flamers are forgetting the fact that authors are only human and not some form of super being, we do actually have lifes to get on with, my writting suffered for 2-3 years due to work and stress and i have only made a recent comback with a very short story. The chapters are short simply because my job has been so demanding recently. Die flamers die!

I do hope you decide to continue this story, i was enjoying reading it ^^

I hope your dad gets well soon also

*huggies and smoochies*
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From ANON - tsuki on December 16, 2005
oh gosh!!this is a really beautiful story.i cried reading it.*sobs*i never really liked tohma,but now i find myself hating him.poor shu-chan.....please don't make him die in the next chapter!!
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From ANON - evilchild (not signed in) on December 12, 2005
I love this! Although I am a bit (very) jealous you can speak Japanese. I want to learn it sooo badly... I hope your dad gets his surgery soon. Oh, yeah and I can't wait to find out what happens next! It just keeps getting better and better. I did wish the little notes (the meaning of some things) were at the bottom 'cause I don't know what you're defining at the begininng sometimes and I forget things like that easily and have to scroll back up to re-read the meaning. But I can deal.
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From ANON - Vinny the Vampire on November 25, 2005
WHAT HAS SHU-CHAN DONE?

*CRIES* My god my poor baby shu-chan. This is all your fault Yuki Eiri! My god if you wasn't so hot I'd hurt you...a little.

Poor Shuichi... the baby what is going to happen???? *On tenderhooks*

Please update soon. WHAT A CLIFFIE!
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