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Reviews for Lost In Your Eyes

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  • From ANON - Selina07 on November 06, 2005
    Yay Yay! I loved it! Update the new chapter allready! ^-^!
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  • From ANON - Sailor Star Dust on November 06, 2005
    Good chapter; I can't wait to read the next one! If the final chapter is gonna be the lemon as in them making love, please have the two at least use protection or something. (Promoting safer sex never hurt anyone! ^_~)
    Kinda hard to believe Mamoru is so stupid and STILL hasn't realized who Usagi is, but I can forgive him because of his cuteness.
    Keep up the great work! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Skimbleshanks on November 04, 2005
    You still haven't updated!!!!!
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  • From ANON - yue on November 04, 2005
    OHHHH. This is fun and i think a pretty good fic. I love how mamoru just comes to so many wrong conclusions and the readers are thinking "what an idiot" and wants to sock one to him. I also liked the part where usagi finds all those pictures of Sailormoon plastered on his bedroom walls. that was hilarious. I hope to read the next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Skimbleshanks on November 02, 2005
    Update...update...update...
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  • From ANON - angel on November 02, 2005
    UPDATE U PROMISED!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Selina07 on November 01, 2005
    Yay! Yay! Update! Update! Its gettin' real good!
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on November 01, 2005
    chap 2, great and I didn't mind it in the alley, like that serena is NOT a ditz and personally I do think it has plot and a lot of emotion
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  • From ANON - DEEP SERENITY on November 01, 2005
    excellent first chap, new twist, and loved the way you let us know what each was thinking, took us through the motions
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  • From ANON - um on October 31, 2005
    Um, I'm glad you have time to write other stories, but "Mine" (Possesion Series, Rurouni Kenshin) was put on hold because of technical problems. I assume this fic was not on the same site as Mine, or it has higher priority than it. I hope you didn't discontinue it, and if you did, I hope you alert us. I was considering putting this review on Mine, but I was afraid you wouldn't check it.
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  • From ANON - Sailor Star Dust on October 31, 2005
    Just checked a site to make sure I was correct, and here it is:
    "Age of consent for sexual activity: The Article 177 of the Penal Code puts the age of consent for sexual actitvity at thirteen (13) years."
    from this site: http://www.interpol.int/Public/Children/SexualAbuse/NationalLaws/csaJapan.asp
    *coughs* O_o; Damn, that's young!

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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on October 31, 2005
    Well, even more interesting. And yes, that's definitely Kenji! By the by, I know, from various refferences in Japanese Anime, Manga, and, um, "special" games that Japanese law permits marriage at age 16, so I always presumed that the age of consent was the same. You might want to look into your facts before accepting that 14 is the age of consent there. Just saying.
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  • From ANON - Leiko on October 31, 2005
    I feel really really awful for being nitpicky but right after Usagi finds out Mamoru is worried about her being a minor in the earlier chapters, she mentions (to herself) that she's turning 16 in three days and that's what seemed to set her into following him but in chapter five during her spiel of imformation about herself she says she's turning sixteen in two months. And she's already told Mamoru about her family's names but that's something that could be the fault of Mamoru's memory.

    I'm really really sorry for over-analyzing the small details of your story and annyoingly spamming up your comments to tell you about them. But consistancy is good for the soul?
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  • From ANON - Leiko on October 31, 2005
    Eep, nevermind about inevitably messing up chapter five. Seems you've already caught your mistake! Will you be uploading the new version of chapter four?
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  • From ANON - Leiko on October 31, 2005
    Excellent story! There are just a couple of inconsistancies in chapter 4 which throws off most of the chapter's plot and inevitably messes with chapter 5. Mamoru already knew that Usagi knew his identity and had previously taken off his mask. Sorry if this has already been mentioned!
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