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Reviews for Strawberries and Cream

By : loche606

From ladygizarme on August 14, 2006
nyaaa it was freakin awesome.. i LOVE how you wake them up each chapter lol.. lmao for momo's insatiable appetite, lol for his kaidoh-like 'wait for me' and then being surprised he actually waited xp and.. ah, hmmmm.. wonder what else sengoku is doing that he isn't telling jin.. lmao for kajimoto learning so well from mizuki that mizuki doesn't even know he's been had *giggles*

of course the voyeurism from momo and kaidoh watching eiji and ryoma was too great lmao, and they were totally caught again lol nyaaa i hope the wait for the next chapter isn't too long.. i REALLY wanna see what happens next.. and you'll do the day from the other perspective as usual nya? heehee i so wanna read it..! ..but i know there's tons of other stuff to work on too XD everytime you update a fic i want more of that one right away!!

well anyway, love ya, love the chap *huggles*
~ crys
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From ANON - Houseki on August 13, 2006
woooot! 'Bout damn time! lol So, wow...lots of pairings going on in this chap...jin and sengoku..cute pair. and what IS sengoku up to??? hmmm????

Kaji and mizukia XD hilarious! but go Kaji!! yeah, he is SO seme over Mizuki and would so minipulate him into thinking that Mizuki was getting his way. nice scene in the bathroom ^__~

OOooh the end was hot. Lots of Momo/Kaidou action goin on in this chap...HOT!! mm them watching eiji and ryoma was hot man..and then getting caught XD hilarious! hehe

loved it girl! can't wait for the next one *hugs*

Me
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From on February 03, 2006
I love this thing! You got the characters just rigth. Yes, Mizuki is a big pervert, who molests little boys. Hurray for Mizuki and his black haired gay attidude! ^o^
Shinji just too cute. Totally normal Shinji. And Akira too. Talking bush was funny. I like the pairings you've written. There isn't enough Momo/Kaidoh in this world. Screw Inui/Kaidoh for once! Inui can go fuck Horio for all I care, but not Kaidoh! *shakes her fist*
I'm not usually a friend of Ryoma/Eiji pairing, but you suprised me. You write them do well!
Please continue soon. Keep it up girl! *glomps*
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From ANON - Houseki on January 20, 2006
hot..hot...hot..ryoma..and his hand...is hot....as well as tezuka/ryoma/eiji...that is...hot. ryoma and his naughty dreams *giggles* how kawaii ^__^

woot ren you go girl! two chaps in two days!! rock on dane believe it meta-metacarpus dane! ......*cocks eyebrow*

woo go ryoma and your naughiness! in an alley, eh? hehe and dood SHINJI!!! *huggles shinji and his rambling/mumbling abilities!!!* he's too sugoi! me love shinji! hehe poor guy though...and poor kamio for not catchin mizuki doing anything.....yet!? lol

anywho...get the next chapper out soon! talk to you...in the morning? *winks*

Mata ja!

Nic
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From ANON - ladygizarme on January 20, 2006
yessssss!!! you can't really help what you dream!!! inne dane!!! (though, damn but that dream was hot ryoma!) and i love the way you keep waking him up in ways like that.. it's priceless!!

aaaanyways.. woot!! eiji is SO about PDA!! ryoma is SO NOT about PDA!! and yet.. non-pda-ryoma goes down on very-pda-eiji (who is very surprised) in a sorta-private-but-still-very-public-alley!! daaaaaaaamn dude ^____^

and i tried.. i REALLY TRIED to hold in my giggles through that part.. it was so great.. but the damn BROKE when "ibu shinji was talking to a bush" roflmfao!!!! damn girl, but you get me gooood!! believe it!! lmao *wipes tears* ahhh you know i love shinji.. i love the way you write him.. i love the way he and ryoma are so polite and yet indifferent when they talk.. i LOVE that kamio and shinji (well really just kamio :p ) are STILL watching mizuki through that bush, even though nothing's happening!! will something happen?? is the next installment gonna be part c, w/ kamio, shinji, and mizuki perspective?? lmao i can dream.. oh yeah, but we DO need to get back to taichi, akutsu and sengoku too nya!

well.. whatever you do, you know i can't wait for more!! wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! inne dane! believe it!

*love for taichi*

~ crys
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From ANON - Houseki on January 19, 2006
Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinjjiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay!! me love me some shinji!! *heart eyes* buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut me LOVE me some KAIDOH moreeeeeeeeeeee!! *drools-heart eyes-holds up banner that says, "I HEART KAIDOH!!!!!"* haaaaaaaaahahahahahaha!!! *cough*

so yeah dood totally momo/kaidohcentric this chap YAYZERZ!!! so sweet of kaidoh to be there for his boyfriend hehe he's such a sweet sweety sweet sweet *cocks eyebrow at you* and him wasnting to come out of the closet first is sucha kaidoh thing to do cuz he's just one to be like that. seeing eiji and ryoma probably makes him feel like it's not such a big thing since no one has made a big deal over them and whanot...cute how momo is the shyer one of the two. anywho can't wait tosee how their relationship pans out more ^__^ cuz....that means kaidoh will be around more muwahahaha!!!

kamio and shinji's parts were hilarious..well, shinji that is...your rambling shinji has me cracking up...which you, totally heard.......*cocks eyebrow at you* the grip tape of course dood..loooove the grip tape and then kamio agreeing to go to the movies, kawaii! but damn kamio and his curiousity!! buuuuuuuuut i bet mizuki is sleepin w/ those boys too muwaaahahahaha!! damn that mizuki--(a) lmao

the jin and sengoku scene was sweet...i do heart a sweet jin.....believe it! that's why i dig kaidoh a lot too cuz he's all hard on the outside but he's so sweet on the inside (watches kaidoh play with kirara and get munched on after she goes bipolar on his ass and comes to his rescue and gives him hugs and kisses and pets his head sweetly) .............................. scary, nya?!

lol anyways...can't wait to read part b!! and oh dood....taichi coming to confront kaidoh-muwahaha! kawaiiness!! he so hearts jin!! .....you need to give taichi some lovin...hook him up w/ sakano or something..tomo??? muwahahahaha!!
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From ANON - ladygizarme on January 18, 2006
lmaoooooooooooooooooooo.. ok, let me just start this off right...... no, wait.. roflmfaooooooo!!!!! ahhhhh ok, ahhhh that was great dude... idc if you think you didn't accomplish anything, sometimes ya just gotta take the time to set things up.. and anyway, it made for great fun reading for me, of course i'm sure you can imagine all the giggling... sooo many things i wanna say...

first off.. well it's been awhile, nya.. so i went back and read the end of ch. 4a to remember what happened w/momo and akutsu and kaidoh.. and lemme tell ya, i was lmao again at shinji and his mumbling.. *sigh* i love that boy.. aaaanyway.. more shinji mumbling this chapter!! haha woooot!! LOVED the lil nostalgia about the grip tape heehee, and shinji's mumbling about the movie and about how "akira hates movies" lol and then kamio goes ahead and says sure to the movie.. but then oohhhh here comes mizuki!!! hmm.. i wonder what poor innocent boy he's hooking his claws into now?? and then kamio wants to see what happens, and of course tonight is a night just like any other where akira gets his way! lol!! inne dane!!

oh yeah, and the WHOLE thing with kaidoh was so sweet dude... at school AND after.. and dude, i know nic is partly (mostly) influencing that now, but i like it lol.. it was too cute.. and lmao dude!! "He would never have thought it possible to basically get thrown out of the closet by someone who was hiding further in it that you ever were." lol.. so true momo, so true :p i was rofl at that!!

and dude, lil touch of taichi angst!! waaaahhhh!! taiiiichiiiii *huggles sweet lil' dan taichi* *hopes her taichi gets some lovin eventually..*

aaaaaaaanyway... i hope you get b part done soooooooon!!! onegaaaaaiiiiii!!!

akutsu for student council, kirihara for prez, taichi for secretary ^___^ (and jin's secret "mistress" ^__~ rofl)

love ya much girl!! inne dane, believe it!! *ack*

*sneaks behind you and SUPERGLOMPS!!*

~ crys

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From Kugatsu on January 18, 2006
Poor Taichi, but then too...noone tells Mamushi off. ^w^
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From ANON - Sankontessou on January 05, 2006
Yo! I really like this story..... which is shocking to me because I'm not much of a yaoi fan! o.o'
So I guess congrats, you got a non-yaoi fangirl to like a yaoi fic lol
Anyways, you better update soon!! I'll be mad if it dies! >.
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From Kugatsu on December 29, 2005
Wow! I'm seeing a love traingle!

Sengoku Akutsu?! Far out and ohhh man

Oh man I am just loving this! So much! too much!

Oh! Oh ! You must continue! Stellar definately! You're on fire!
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From ANON - ladygizarme on December 27, 2005
wooooot!! i'm lovin the new chapters!! and i def like the idea of a and b chapters... posted simultaneously??? nya??!! ^__^ the momo chapter was awesome, i cracked up for alot of it, and kamio, shinji, taichi, akutsu and sengoku all making appearances is FUCKING AWESOME!! i can't wait to see what you do with them in the future!! i demand more shinji ramblings!! motto! MOTTO, HAYAKU!! *ahem* yeah.. and then tezuka has a crush on ryoma?? (lmao but he's dating nicole..) omtezzie, i'm sensing possible future angst with ryoma tezzie and eiji... aiyaaa.. but yay!! ryoma/eiji lemon!! sweeeetness dude, juuuuust what i needed ^_______~ can't wait for more!! omtrf, seriously!!

*supereijiglomp*

~ crys
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From ANON - \'Gumi on November 13, 2005
Wonderful. Just wonderful. I love the TakeshixKaoru bits. x3
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From ANON - Chiisu on November 09, 2005
Good fic as usual. Keep up the good work Ren!!!!!
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From ANON - lily anderson on November 09, 2005
AWESOME STORY!!! my two favs in a lemony setting. YEAH!!! more more more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Houseki on November 03, 2005
ohh eiji you are such a naughty boy!! lol and dood kaidoh/momo wooooooooooot!! lol got to tlove that...oh and i loved the line about how the script never changes hehe i was beginning to notice that lol another sugoi chap ren! keep them comin *huggles*

Nic
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