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Reviews for Unforgiving Dawn

By : YaoiMuffin
  • From ANON - Christina on January 01, 2007
    HAWT
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  • From ANON - Noriko_Sakuma on January 10, 2006
    *points to Sailor Aurora's Review*

    What the f*ck is wrong with you?!?!? Haven't you read the manga?!?! Haven't you see the ORIGINAL anime?!?! Don't say anything If you'll only have seen the lousy USA DUB ('CAUSE IS CENSORED CRAP!!!!) (CRAP CRAP CRAP CRAP!!!)

    Sorry if this is random, I just have to say it -____-Uu
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  • From ANON - Sailor Aurora on November 18, 2005
    I haven't finished reading this fanfic..

    but I just had to point out one thing.... Sanjji does not smoke! he has an lollipop in his mouth at all times! although it's easy to mistake that as a cigarette, it's a lollipop. if you looked closely at him when he had his mouth open at times, you would certainly see the hardened red candy on a stick inside his mouth.

    and second... if he smoked, he'd be an lousy cook... because the smell and taste of smoke tends to seep right into the food, which is another reason why Sanjji would not ever smoke.

    It's just small details like that bugs me... and if you don't believe me, then you can look up pictures of Sanjji with his mouth open to reveal the LOLLIPOP!

    *clears throat* that said, I can move on and enjoy the fanfic.
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  • From ANON - Kuragari Okami on November 14, 2005
    HAH!! That was Awesome! *fangirl squeel* I loved it! very nicely done, the situation was perfect....*sigh* I am happty things turned out alright in the end.>^.^
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  • From ANON - NebuNeferu on November 13, 2005
    I know you'll like the site I gave you *evil smile* It's delicious isn't it? UKE SANJI AND SEME LUFFY 4EVER!!! YEAH!!!!! If you want more SanjixLuffy pairing doujinshi I can give you around 12 or 13 doujinshi of them with the same artist. Only that, the artist is not as good as the artist who own the site I gave you and the seme is Sanji not Luffy. Anyway, if you're interested in the doujinshi, just e-mail me ^_^ same thing goes to those people who see this review. If you want SanjixLuffy doujinshi, just ask me hehehe


    Anyway I have one comment about the 7th chapter: IT'S FREAKING HOT AND YOU MAKE ME DROOL ALL THE TIME!!!!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!! >_< MAKE ANOTHER STORY LIKE THIS AND I'LL GIVE YOU MORE AND MORE DELICIOUS THINGS!!!!!! (I think...hehehe)
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  • From ANON - Noriko Sakuma on November 12, 2005
    friggi'n GOD!! SCANLATIONS!!!!! (I didn't notice until now xD baka baka >_3!!!! (It's your site or anothers? o.o)
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  • From ANON - Noriko Sakuma on November 12, 2005
    O-M-G!!!!! O0O

    KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!

    I was squealing all the time!!!!! >w< (At first I couldn't read it!! I was too excited XDUu)

    But I love it!!!! *3* (I don´t know who's the lucky one here, Luffy or Zoro&Sanji xD) (Though I REALLY LOVE LUFFY!! xD Everyone wants a piece of him and this fic backups my teory xD)

    VERY NICE WORK!!!!!

    I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!! >.
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  • From ANON - Ebony on November 12, 2005
    T.T

    I love you. That was so pretty. Don't worry about the wait. I love you.
    Update soon

    I love you
    Ebby
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  • From ANON - The Empress on November 12, 2005
    I like your story. Good thing Luffy didn't have to choose. I liked your lemon, too. ;)

    And Another thing, I freakin' love you for Sanji/Zoro site. *drools and nosebleed* Oh hell yes!!!! THANK YOU!!!! :D
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  • From ANON - Kuragari okami on November 11, 2005
    Lol....YAY! I love this chapter.....but they made Luffy cry....it's hard to see someone so happy all the time cry....HAHA when Nami walked in on them I was like "Ahhh thats Great!!" soooo funny....I lurv this ficcy and I hope you write more! please write more...>^.~
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  • From ANON - Ebony on November 09, 2005
    “What if Luffy didn’t have to choose?”

    And in that moment I fell in love with Zoro. Yeah I don't blame you for hating Nami just a little, I do too. But that b/c she treats Sanji like crude most of the time. and maybe, just maybe I'm jealose, maybe ;). I can't wait for the next chapter, but for the love of god don't rush it! One bad lemon can ruin a very good story and this is a very good story. So, I can wait for a good lemon:)

    much love
    Ebby
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  • From ANON - Noriko_Sakuma on November 09, 2005
    YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! Some SanLu action in this chappie weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~ :dance:

    YESS tasty threesome in next chappie!!! OMG WEEEEEEE!!! x3 I love you, did you knew that ;D I was so happy to see this fic actualized, this definetly made my day worth xD

    Evil cliffies!! Oh well I'll wait for the next chap patiently *.*
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  • From ANON - Delay on November 09, 2005
    Well, i couldn't lett you did I? and the last chapter made it al just to good!! It was so cute to read!
    Poor luffy, guess zoro had to come up with the plan.. mmmmmm.. lemon..... haha.. how will luffy react?!
    I'll be waiting.......
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  • From ANON - NebuNeferu on November 09, 2005
    Ops, forgot to say one more thing. YOU'LL WRITE THREESOME? OMFG!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOTHING CAN MAKE MY DAY HAPPIER BUT TO SEE THIS WONDERFUL AND DELICIOUS STORY!!!! I hope the site I gave you will give you enough inspiration to write the threesome ;) and tell me what you think of the site ok
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  • From ANON - NebuNeferu on November 09, 2005
    BANZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY, YOU DID IT!!! SANJI KISS LUFFY *Nosebleed* I can't take it anymore *Sigh and faint from blood lost*

    *Suddenly recover* Oh yeah, I forgot ^_^ Here's something delicious I want you to see "http://satsuki.cside.com/cgi/theme/view.cgi?mode=menu". You probably seen it before, but if you haven't, please go see and enjoy *evil smile*

    Your story IS SO COOL!!!!!!! SUPER DUPER LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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