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Reviews for Unforgiving Dawn

By : YaoiMuffin
  • From ANON - Kuragari Okami on November 08, 2005
    You wanted comments so here's one.....errrr....I love the fic and the concept... but it could've done without the Nami bashing earlier...she's cool and really isn't using Sanji, she cares for everyone in the crew...she's just being nice and polite to Sanji for fawning over her so much....nothin' wrong with that....N*E*ways I still love your ficcy and update soon! much lurv!>^.^
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  • From ANON - lemon on November 08, 2005
    I liked this story~^^"
    They're like my top 3 favorite characters in One Piece, even though my favorite is ZoroxSanji,
    but I'm always amused to see any interaction involving the three of them.XD (Sounds fun to begin with)
    And I must add...Threesome rocks!
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  • From ANON - Ebony on November 08, 2005
    Damn it Sanji you better fucking tell him!!!! And I want to at the least some making out when you do!!!!

    Anyway, yeah, sorry had to say that. How are you doing? Good, i hope. You know me, crazy little fan girl, all I really want is some smut. In return I review! I would like to take a small moment to say your story makes me very happy. :)

    Much love
    Ebby
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  • From ANON - NebuNeferu on November 08, 2005
    I promise if you give a Sanji/Luffy scene in the next chapter, I'll give you something delicious to see *evil smile* I JUST HAVE TO GIVE YOU SINCE YOUR STORY IS SO DELICIOUS!!!!! UPDATE ASAP OK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Delay on November 08, 2005
    It doesn't matter it isn't a sanjixzoro, it's still cute! Keep updating, cuz i'll be waiting!
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  • From ANON - Noriko_Sakuma on November 07, 2005
    More onegai!! XD (mean, mean cliffies!! >.w
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  • From ANON - Ebony on November 06, 2005
    "this will become a threesome"

    T.T I love you.

    Nice chapter. I can really feel for Luffy, it hard to love so one and have some one come onto you. It becomes hard to tell the person 'no' because your just so damn confused... love is a bitch.

    plz update soon!
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  • From ANON - Delay on November 06, 2005
    you say this is a luffyxsanji luffyxzoro but is it olso a zoroxsanji?
    that would be cool !
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  • From ANON - Noriko_Sakuma on November 05, 2005
    Threesome!! HELL YEAH! >D

    Curious thing isn that I didn't like threesomes until I watch One Piece, those Tree are the ONLY threesome I love >w
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  • From ANON - NebuNeferu on November 05, 2005
    Oh one more thing, make this a threesome ok. It'll be AWSOME!!!! Three hot guys f***ing...*drool*
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  • From ANON - NebuNeferu on November 05, 2005
    I can't believe that Luffy actually has 2 HOT guys kneeling all over him for lust and love, and he DIDN'T REALIZE OR NOTICE???? I just LOVE this story, update ASAP ok ^_~
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  • From ANON - yuugakohakusrembrance on November 04, 2005
    interesting very interesting...update soon! *evil cliffhangers*
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  • From ANON - GlidedLilyu on November 04, 2005
    Everyone wants One Piece of the Staw Hat's ass! Poor Zoro and Sanji both caught up in the love for Luffy. Nice job.
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  • From ANON - Ebony on November 03, 2005
    That whole {tell him!} part, i've done that so many times. Poor Sanji-kun. I find that sooner or later I just can't take it any more so i avoid the person like the pleague, yeah. I love this story. please update.
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  • From ANON - Kuragari Okami on November 03, 2005
    OI! Love the fic please update soon!>^.^
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