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Reviews for The Stepbrother

By : Muoi
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 23, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2006
    im sorry but that was so lame
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  • From ANON - Bex Tha Deadly Hex on December 24, 2005
    One tip for the future:

    a) Make a rape warning before you have someone read a fic like this.

    That was cruel and harsh and very offending to people who had been raped by immediate/non related family members. Make a rape warning before letting people read a fanfic like this. If you had made the warning in the summary, then this would have been fine, but be considerate next time.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 17, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2005
    is it possible for you to actually have a chapter where Darien's friends do end up having sex with Serena?
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  • From marqqui on December 08, 2005
    Quite crude and very harsh.
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  • From ANON - gross on December 01, 2005
    Ok first of all, this fan fiction was gross and horrible, I'm a huge Darien and Serena fan, and i so do not think that Darien would abuse her like that i mean, you could have made it a bit better many, have her be happy or enjoy it, or something or maybe even let her fall inlove with him, but this story was just sick, and Diamond would never be darien's friend, as well, i think u kinda should have said there would be rape, and this story was just nasty. so i thank u, thank u for ruining darien's and serena's love. And as well, Darien is a sick fuck, to do this to his stepsister, who is just about his sister,,,,, So this story was just sick and disgusting.
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  • From ANON - Lady Moon on November 30, 2005
    That was very good, you sould totally make this in to a series!!
    well please think about , and i look forward to more!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on November 27, 2005
    Hello...
    I like stories with smut and romance. This tale of yours...was half erotic, half unkewl. The difference between rape and ravishing: Ravishing=The hero forces the heroine to submit to his seduction, they both r attracted to/love each other, and they both enjoy it. Rape=Darien in this story. He enjoyed it. Serena didnt. He was a dick about it. :P
    Could you please write future chappys in which hes nicer to her, and she grows to love him and sex?
    Just a suggestion...
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  • From ANON - Kristen on November 15, 2005
    OK!!!!!! i can't believe you had Darien rape Serena! I have always been a big Dare/Sere fan but this is not what i expected. Maybe you should make her fall for him or something! Just please don't abuse her anymore
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  • From ANON - jessica on November 12, 2005
    that's it? now that was interesting. you could have warned that there was rape. other than that it was cool. make a sequel or something cause that story was hot!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 03, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Lilium Noir on November 02, 2005
    Please, never, ever write Sailormoon fanfiction again. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - danny on November 01, 2005
    now that was interesting. you could have warned that there was rape. other than that it was cool. make another chapter. it kinda sounds like fic to be continued
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  • From ANON - BB on November 01, 2005
    Hey cool story. Write more chaps. or a sequel or something.
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