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Reviews for Shadows of the mind

By : Queerbee
  • From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2005
    you very good at what you do my friend. you do more yeah? keep it coming my frien.
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  • From ANON - blackdestiny on November 22, 2005
    I have to agree about the punction but that can be improved great story please continue soon don't let your reader wait forever. We want to read more. So please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on November 15, 2005
    So, whatever "They" are, they're also after Rini, huh? Interesting... Do continue as soon as you can! Laters!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 07, 2005
    Hmm, this chapter feels abruptly cut off. Are you sure it fully uploaded? THa taside, interesting. Abuse, or possession? Assault, or self-inflicted? Innocent, or insane? The questions mount... I look forward to the next installment. Laters.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 06, 2005
    AU, I see. Umm, how old is Hotaru supposed to be in this story, just out of curiosity? It would help the set up. Oh, and your punctuation skills could use a little fine tuning, just so you know(noticed a few missing commas and at least one near the front that was simply misplaced.). Laters.
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  • From ANON - blackdestiny on November 05, 2005
    Hey great story that you have hear who are the ones you called them huh? anyways please continue with this story. What happen to your other stories that you had like the Vampire and Ghost huh?
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