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Reviews for Heat

By : DevilnBlue
  • From ANON - Cumi-ko on January 10, 2006
    That was wonderful. You must complete it. I would like to find out who goes first.
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  • From ANON - WinterWolf on January 09, 2006
    I say first tsume, then tsume and toboe(sp?) at the same time, then hige, then kiba, then if you want some more threesomes.
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  • From ANON - ice on January 07, 2006
    this is funny
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  • From ANON - dustbunni on January 06, 2006
    i want more! i want more! I WANT MORE, DAMN IT!!!
    please continue as soon as possible. i love it, its so awesome!

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  • From ANON - whitewolf33 on January 05, 2006
    wow this is really interesting
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  • From ANON - Kiki O. on January 04, 2006
    I seriously think Kiba should have a go first, since he's the alpha male. Then Tsume... then Hige... and lastly Toboe. Or whatever you choose. This fic is coming out great. Honestly.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2005
    OMG! UPDATE SOOOON!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lowrider on December 27, 2005
    Oye, I think Toboe should go first. Either him or Kiba/Hige.
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  • From ANON - Beast Maker on December 27, 2005
    I say go with Toboe either first or second. With plenty of BSDM on Blue's part and maybe some furs
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  • From ANON - Rider on December 27, 2005
    Tsume then Tsume then Tsume and at the end TSUME!!! (and only Tsume :P:P:P) ;)
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  • From ANON - Catnip on December 27, 2005
    Hige first, Hige first.
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  • From ANON - Scotch on December 27, 2005
    Other than a few typo's and misused words and phrases, this was a great chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - Canis Star on December 27, 2005
    A splendid chapter, one I really enjoyed. Like I said before this has the potential to become a great fic and from the look of things it will be. You’ve done a brilliant job of capturing many of the characters personalities (Kiba is a little oc in my opinion but then it’s really hard to write about him) especially with Blue, you have added a hint more of realism to the character by having her normally calm and polite personality altered as a result of her heat. Genius, pure and simple. This chapter has proven to be just as good as the last, possibly even better as a result of Blue’s cruel yet arousing teasing. I really don’t know who should be the one to take her virginity but if push comes to shove the pack can always come at her all at once.

    ~Canis Star~

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  • From ANON - Redcloak on December 27, 2005
    You updated, great! Keep up the good work ^_^
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  • From ANON - Little Brown Wolf on December 26, 2005
    Alright, I’ve been waiting for you to update forever. I have to tell you I love this chapter even more than I did the last one, Blue had the pack completely at her mercy until she decided to let Tsume tie her hands back. I love the way she was toying with them and I can’t wait to see who is going to mount her first and if she will be able to untie herself. Personally I agree with ^______^ about having either Kiba or Hige go first as Kiba is the Alpha male and it is his right to claim Blue and Hige is so happenly the closest thing she has to a mate. As much as I want Toboe to mate with her I think that he should either go after Kiba and Hige or just plain last that way Blue’s hands won’t be bound and she can seduce him on her own like she was going to or so the others can coach him. Anyway I hope you update soon because I can’t wait to read the next chapter.
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