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Reviews for The Very Naughty Grasper With Very Bad Luck

By : YoukaiDreams
  • From ANON - bibbiesparks on March 07, 2013
    Please update this story so I my see what happens.and it is about time Tohma gets a taste of his own medicine Thank You.
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  • From anessavanella on January 10, 2010
    why wont u update?
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  • From Saka on January 21, 2008
    Aww is this really not gonna be updated. I'd love to read more, it's so good and leaves me wantin to read more.
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  • From ANON - Kasey on December 30, 2006
    OH MY GOD! You cant just leave it like that! NOOOO WAYYY PAL! Finish! ::flashes silverish thingy:: Seeee I talked to Shuichi and he wants to find out what happens too !!!
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  • From ANON - seiki on August 03, 2006
    Wow!!!!!!!! When is the next punishment...please wan to know how creepy tohma deal wit genki shuichi's punishment/////// genki yo!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - RunningThief on February 10, 2006
    HELL YEAH! WOOT! Finally! This is the kind of stuff I've been looking for! This is one of my favorites. I do hope you continue!
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  • From ANON - Kianna on November 30, 2005
    That was good first chapter. I look forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing.
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  • From ANON - JouKaibaMokie on November 15, 2005
    just put up another chapter this one was really good, and please Shuichi KILL THE DAMN BASTARD!
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on November 12, 2005
    Wow! Sca-ry! Shuichi didn't cut Tohma too deeply I hope! I can totally see this actually happening. When someone is pushed just a little too far and backed into a corner, there is no telling how they'll react and what they might do. I should be furious with you for stopping right when things were getting so good, but if I did that you might not update at all! :D Please update this ASAP!
    Koneko
    P.S. If you want to read another story of Tohma being uke then might I suggest "Of hierarchies, games and tables". No, I didn't write it but it is one of the few (if any) stories with Tohma being submissive. ^_~ It might not be what you're looking for but just try it and see if you like it! I did!
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  • From ANON - amethyst on November 12, 2005
    very cool... i wanna see more...
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  • From ANON - Angel on November 12, 2005
    ::screams:: Agh!! Poor Tohma! How can Shuichi DO that to Tohma?! He cut his...his STOMACH...~::faints::

    Update!!
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  • From ANON - Mellie on November 12, 2005
    Oh wow, I never thought that Shuichi would be so... yeah. Well it is dark, but also sexy. You did a great job commbining the two. I can't wait to read more!! I'm Loving it so far!!
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  • From ANON - Araki on November 12, 2005
    ::Did read author notes, but is going to say things anyway::

    I do believe the #1 thing people will complain about - honestly - would be the fact that Shuichi wouldn't do something like this, not innocent neglegent Shuichi. :) Tohma might to Shuichi, just not seen the other way around. Another, you might get hit by a person complaining about Japanese usage, think i saw one phrase that no one is going to know what the hell is being said. -___- I use fan-girl japanese all the time, and get complained about it. So, yah.

    Assuming that this means i need to get off my lazy ass and type out my PWP, ne?

    Besides all the above, very productive story. Many quirks, good use of Tohma-uke smut. Always adored by the fans. I suppose threatening him is the only way you can get your way with him...ne?

    Araki
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  • From ANON - Odzy on November 12, 2005
    "Fuck" count.


    HOLY FUCK. You and I both know how fucking sexy that is. You are fucking sexy for writing this fuckity-fucked story. Touma
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  • From ANON - Naomi on November 12, 2005
    Woot! I feel so cool .. such a sexy story partially dedicated to me. XD Hahahah I loved it though. :3 It's a bit more violent than what I usually read, which makes it more fascinating to me. XD Gahh .. I don't do long comments. ^^;
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