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By : sakurazukamori6

From ANON - Nacht Kind on February 05, 2006
Good Lord! You can't afford to not continue!!...or rather, I can't afford for you to not continue!! Okay, responses. 1) Call it mild AU. He only learned something of it originally and I doubt the intesity of the situation had fully sunk in by the end of things in the movie. 2) Chestnut....warm, but with a mildly dusty feel. 3) Takaya: brown with fleck of gold, thus they can look gold, perhaps hazel. Naoe: fucked if I know, but they're dark. Keep running with violet, it's a sexy color. 4) Again, AU. And trust me, people will forgive mild discrepancies with the original storyline; first of all, it's your story and should be portrayed however the hell you want it to be, and secondly, this has to be one of the single most beautiful pieces of fiction I have ever had the fortune to read.

I had chills......I can't really describe it beyond that; it was something like sensory overload. Naoe's intensity was something to behold, as was Takaya's surrender. Conquering in its command of emotion, a deep and all-consuming need for one another depicted by actions holding both an unrelenting love and profound satisfaction brought on by years of trial and devotion.

I am such a sap.....and am also absurdly thrilled that you may continue it yet. It truly is so beautiful to behold, and I cannot wait for Naoe to claim Takaya, the notion has me giddy and rather incoherent.

Wanting to be supportive and feeling rather warm toward life,
~Nacht
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From ANON - dk_joynotsignedin on February 03, 2006
That was really yummy! Please write more! PLEASE! I really love this story.

Sorry it took me so long to review - I've been doing a bit of catching up in school.

In response to some of your questions: I don't know how to describe Naoe's hair color. The colors in the whole anime are so muted looking that it's sometimes hard to tell what colors they're supposed to be. In response to your first question, I think he knew everything at that point, so you should make this an AU (there's so much more that you can do if you write AU's - I do it all the time!)

But again, please keep going and I can't wait for more smut!
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From ANON - Kristina on February 01, 2006
1) it is yes, sorry
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From ANON - pacifica on February 01, 2006
super!super! I awaited the continuation impatiently and I am not
disappointed!! please continue with more sex but how it is not the
last finally I require a little too much but I would like that it have
a continuation there after the act that takaya as opens him nao�
finally as they think if they really go form a couple finally here are
thing like that!! T inki�te not for the errors and continues because
it is really not serious!! I would also say that it is after mirroir
it that takaya remembered of minako and Naoe you can clearly say brown
for his hair in any case continues and that the continuation is made
because I languished soon and congratulation because it is a wonder!!!!
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From ANON - Zero on February 01, 2006
This is such a nice story! You have captured the personality of the characters well, and the storyline is such a great extension from the series and OVA that have been released so far. If only Mirage of Blaze will really take such a good turn concerning the relationship between Takaya and Naoe, then a lot of fans would be jumping with joy ;-) Please do write more soon! Because it doesn't seem like there will be a new OVA released any time soon and it is good to have a great quality story to read while us fans are waiting!
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From ANON - Enzeru on January 31, 2006
KEEP WRITING! GOD DAMN YOU! IF YOU STOP I'LL EXPLODE WITH UNDAUNTING RAGE! lol or dissappointment. I'm not too sure what happened with the mirror thing. i'm pretty sure that Takaya's and Kagetora's soul kind of merged together a little more, making the memories more present in his mind but not exactly clear. It's like Takaya because slightly multiple personality disorder-y...cause when there is danger or he is majorly pissed, there is more Kagetora and normally he's just Takaya with a splash of Kagetora (Mostly in the OVAs) Also, I think a good adjective for Naoe's hair color is 'cinnamon' brown or maybe 'chocolater'. It obvioulsy has to be named after food cause he's so yum-yum-yummy! (PS: Please keep writing this, it keeps me happy ^_~)
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From ANON - Rinoa on January 31, 2006
wow hot chapter~! more sex? yes please~! ^_^ um about your question i can only say that i dont care so much that there are a few wrong detailes~ and please continue it since it's such a hot fic~! and i think you can say that Naoes hair is something like um light brown and why the hell did they change their eye colores in the movie is a complete mystery to me but good improvising on using them both~!
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From ANON - Juna on January 31, 2006
*Is on the floor with a major nose bleed and a puddle of salvia* Holy cannolis...that was ....hot...Gah! HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!!! Yes more sex in the next chapter! Oh yes please please please! I love this story! I say make it AU why? Cause i might give wrong info too. XD I mean i know of MOB but i might have my info mixed up cause i usually do that alot, i confuse them with other animes or stories. XD I have that bad of a memory. Sorry i ain't no help. But the way you wrote it i see no biggie in it, it still did not lose the MOB feel, i say it is fine ya know. I love it. Keep it going the way it is. Too perfect to change or stop! Oh please DO NOT stop i would cry and die. Anyways loved this chapter you did such a gorgeous and oh so awesome job. Hot hot hot. Still drool. Must read part again. XD Great job. Update soon when you get the chance ya =3
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From ANON - SEIRRA QUEST on January 29, 2006
SO AWESOME. CAN'T WAITE FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.
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From ANON - eman on January 10, 2006
i bow down in my uter graditude for you. please continue with the fic. it's so good. it makes my heart start pumping and is very well written.PPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeee keep going.
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From ANON - Nacht Kind on January 10, 2006
Date rape....snerk...Takaya does have a sense of humor twisted enough.

Beautiful characterization again, Naoe had a warmth that didn't have to be directly convied, but still retained his strong personality. Well appreciated confessional, mildly rambling, but that holds true to form with the human desire to be understood. Takaya was a strong-willed brat and I loved him for it, excellent dissertation concerning Takaya's reaction to past event based on his own thoughts, very like him and his striving to emphasize his being his own person. Interested in seeing Takaya's responses as their relationship grows and he realizes, to a greater extent, what a Powerful factor Naoe has become in his life, human's being what we are and seeking to gain and develope connections with another. Probably gonna hit like a truck, and he may realize how he's become, in a fashion, dependent on Naoe for his strength and how he's so content with him. He might feel slightly angry at first, but I have the feeling that it's got the potential for insight, humor, and resulting sweetness.(look at me ramble...)

I believe that, with the memories beginning to be realized, that they, Takaya and Kagetora, may mesh. By that I mean the Takaya will be able to recall things and have more of the understanding held by Kagetora, not that the persons will necessaryily fuse. Takaya is the dominant personality, so I believe he will remain intact and, in fact, form the core being with Kagetora's memories as another layer or portion to his personality, but he will still be Takaya and will remain so even once he is again reicarnated, after all, he has become the central entity.

Dancing....my head connected with my desk, I couldn't take it...and that's just dancing!

Outrageously enjoyable so far, can't wait to see it progress,
Nacht
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From ANON - Ri on January 04, 2006
Gah I haven't reviewed! Missed the updates my computer was down for a bit. Stupid machine! I must say the last chapter was sooooooooooooo steamy hot!! I loved it! Awesome job! Omg! I smell sex coming, please say I am right? Heh Oh man you know what would be hot!? If you make Takaya ride Naoe!! PLEASE PLEASE! For some odd reason i always wanted to read that! Ride em cowboy! XD I am sick. But i love it! Please update soon. Love the story ^_^
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From ANON - Enzeu on January 04, 2006
Sex? Sex, sex sex? in the next chapter, yes? hahaa I love Predilection too btw
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From ANON - pacifica on January 04, 2006
I like your fic, it is great!! I hope is not finish I like this is a continuation but the last chapter it's my prefer !!
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From ANON - SakuraRC on January 04, 2006
wooow~ hot chapter~! please make more~!! love it ~ keep the good work up!
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