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By : sakurazukamori6
  • From ANON - Juna on January 04, 2006
    *hugs* That was hot!! I am nose bleeding!! Thank you thank you!! I loved it, if only it was longer >> =3 Kidding. It was hot and i loved it. I cannot wait to read more. I loved Naoe's confession it was so sweet and deep! Omg i also love the way you described how Takaya was feeling in the club! That was awesome detailing! I mean the way you explained it it was brilliant!! Lovely job! I enjoyed it and i so cannot wait for them to get it on! XD I mean takaya saying he will be getting some. Great job! I am so in love with it. Keep it up! Weee see you got my hyped up. =^o^=
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  • From ANON - nacht kind on January 02, 2006
    Your work is positively stunning...I love how, despite the utter chaos a torment around them, Naoe and Takaya are still being inexorably drawn together. My one concern is Naoe's feelings, oddly enough. Naoe states he has love for Lord Kagetora(a bastard, I agreed), and his base meaning is, what I gather, love for his soul, but then, what about Takaya. Yes, it is the same soul, so the core remains the same, but the people, due the difference cirmcustances of experience, developement, and a number of other things, are different. Takaya is not Kagetora, in soul, but not conciousness. So then, the question is, does Naoe love Takaya; actually, really, truly, and purely Takaya, not that which he represents, but Takaya. I know that didn't come out very clearly, and I tend to ramble and repeat myself, I, like Takaya, find it difficult to express my thoughts and ideas in words, though they make sense in my head, but, I hope you could understand at least the main idea I was trying so desperately to portray.

    Very moving, I can't wait to observe as their emotions futher evolve,
    Nacht



    P.S. Sometimes Takaya does need a good kick in the head....but then again, he was sort of sniped by cupid, so I suppose we can cut him a little slack(which he has definitely used up by this time, I might add...stupid, emotionall dysfunctional...::grumble grumble:: )
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  • From ANON - Enzeru on January 01, 2006
    Ujiteru's right hand man's name was Kotaru Fuuma of the Fuuma ninja clan. ^___^ Keep up the good work man!
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  • From ANON - juna on December 31, 2005
    Poor naoe. Gosh i always cry everytime i read about how much he loves Kagetora and suffers for it. I love him but i love Takaya too, but i love them all. Anyways! Yay Dirty dancing!! You are the most grooviest author ever!!!!!! I love you!! Not in that way but love as in you are the coolest!!! Gratsi! Oh Kagetora's brother... i recall him but can't recall his name. grrr curse my memory. He was a ninja? O_o? Are you talking about that sexy ninja with long hair and tight black outfit? Or i am just to busy thinking about him. Hee. ^^';;;;; Love Haruie she so cool. Loved her thoughts about being a ninja very funny of her to come up with that. Anyways I hope you feel better. I mean with the cold and all. And take your time with the updates if you need to. No rush yes? Lovely chapter I think. I don't mind reading about Kagetora being such a bastard, makes him so cool....yes i am wierd. BUt i do not like him being mean to poor Naoe. Ahem! Soory for the long review i am so talkative today. O_O Loved the chapter. Thank you for it. Yay dirty dancing! Heh sorry i just can't wait for that part. Well then till next chapter bye bye and happy holidays! *^-^*
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  • From ANON - dk_joynotsignedin on December 31, 2005
    It's good to have at least a little Kagetora bashing! He was a total bastard to Naoe and deserved at least some of what happened to him. I feel bad for how Takaya's life turned out, but the fact that he turned into just as much of a jerk as Kagetora annoys me. He should have learned from the past and treated people more decently. Anyway, sorry for the whining - I really loved this chapter and I hope Takaya isn't too mean to Naoe. Please keep going and update as soon as you can!
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  • From ANON - Tommy on December 27, 2005
    NO...NO... why do you have to stop here. Update soon. I need to know what happen. OMG... please update soon... I going crazy. I took me so long snice I read stroy between this two. Love them to death. hurry....AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA... I must know what going to happen next....just when i was into the story... aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

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  • From ANON - twisted-sheets on December 24, 2005
    And you leave it here! *cries*

    Wonderful fic. I liked how you depicted them. God, those two need to have sex. They really need to.
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  • From ANON - dk_joynotsignedin on December 22, 2005
    This is great, so please keep going! Sorry I haven't reviewed 'til now - I'm at my fiance's parents house and haven't had much time to check stuff on the internet. But this is good and I can't wait to see how Haruie responds.
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  • From ANON - Juna on December 19, 2005
    Yay dance club/bar!!! Will Naoe dance with Takaya? O_O OMG!! DIRTY DANCE DIRTY DANCE!!! XD Sorry sorry i love Haruie she is like the coolest, especially the way she is portrayed like a mother slash sister. Anyways great job, pleae update as soon as you can, cause i want to see how she will act from what Naoe told her and also to see what will happen. ^^
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  • From ANON - tangerine on December 11, 2005
    Oops! I didn't see the other chapters when I reviewed earlier... Argh! This just proves that I haven't been visiting adultfanfic for quite some time.
    I feel so dumb ^__^
    I love how the story is going though... with Minako and all. And I love how Takaya tries to keep his status as master, even though he's so messes up inside.
    I feel like smacking Takaya, watching him treating his sister so rudely... even though it could be attributed to his presently screwed up mind.
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  • From ANON - tangerine on December 11, 2005
    Nice start! About the direction of the plot... well, no matter what you do, try to add in as much angst as possible. A happy ending is sweet, but the road to a happy ending has to be as angsty one. That's what Mirage thrives on~ Lol ^__^

    By the way, I'd love to see another OVA too, hopefully one with at least a kiss (obviously it'll be a forced kiss since they've not progressed much). But it'll take more then an ova for a resolution. Perhaps there should be a long anime TV series instead. Haha! I'm dreaming... >_
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  • From ANON - dk_joynotsignedin on December 08, 2005
    By the way, I saw that someone wants an English translation of the manga. I know a site that has it ... well ... not all of it, but they have the first part and even a prequel! Maybe if enough people review and tell them to keep going they'll update sooner (but I think they are still on vacation right now.) Anyway, the site is http://asphodel.atspace.com/writing/translations/index.html

    Go to that site and go to the bottom - they have both the translations alone and scanlations (higher on the page, a little above the prequel). The prequel is called Exaudi Nos and is a really good story about stuff that happened to Naoe before he knew that Kagetora had come back. It's sad, but it's good.

    Have fun!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - dk_joynotsignedin on December 08, 2005
    Urk! I didn't realize this chapter was up! Argh! It would have made my day if I would have been paying attention! Oh well... I've read it now and I love it. Yeah, Naoe and Takaya really should be checked in somewhere. But we love them anyway. Please keep going and update as soon as you can! I have my last exam tomorrow so I'll finally be able to start writing again too!
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  • From ANON - Raythe on December 08, 2005
    Oh, this was just lovely! There aren't many Mirage flicks out there and here is one that's well written and sexy and interesting ... whee! I was so happy to see it. You definitely have Takaya's character down! Naoe's, too. I, like you, thought that Naoe raped Minako, but I thought he did it when Kagetura was in that body ... hmmm, the series is so hard to follow in some respects. I've heard that the manga its based on is huge with even more history and stuff. So probably there's more explanation in it. I've looked for an English translation, but no luck. Anyways, I love what you are doing. So please keep up the good work and I look forward greatly to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kyuuketsuki on December 07, 2005
    i'm glad someone's finally doing a MOB fic again. You write very well. keep it up! ^_^)v
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