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By : ffpandayaoi
  • From AgniDragon on March 16, 2007
    I need to point out, that Hiro proved himself to be a really bad master. Okay so Shigure needs to learn how to control himself right? So Hiro punishes him, makes him wear womens underwear and says he can't cum. Thats his punishment.

    So Hiro now decides he wants to know Shigure's limit and purposely pushes him past his limit. Then punishes him for breaking the rules. I'm sorry but this is rediciously stupid. If there had been any sense of what a master should be doing...If anyone should have been punished it should have been HIRO.

    Hiro broke his own rule by >>purposely
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  • From Hestia on February 26, 2007
    I hope you get some time to work on this soon! Wow! It's a crime to say it, but I like this vision of the future after Grav. vol. 12 better than Grav EX #1. Oddly enough did you see Shuichi's fantasy of being Yuki's slave in that?? Maybe the canon is headed this way . . .

    Anyway--what do I say? You're affecting my own writing--I've suddenly got a spanking scene and a paddling scene in my own fanfic that is pretty OCC!

    Pretty amazing stuff!

    I really like the Hiro/Suguro story also--it's interesting to see that one develop!
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  • From ShuTohma on February 22, 2007
    I would just like to congratulate you on a very good story so far and just thought I’d let you know that I just finished reading your story twice and plan on reading it again, there are only two other Fan Fictions that I have read more than once, and I really enjoy this story line. I wish you lots of luck with Depravity and Depravity 1.0. And I hope that you are able to update soon.
    Your Fan,
    -ShuTohma-

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  • From kamikazepenguinx on February 18, 2007
    Ahh! Oh poor shu-chan, bleach burns hurt! well, the one on my face did, anyway (bad hair-dying experience...o_0)

    anyway, i just have to say thank you for giving me such great entertainment for a week! i love the Shu/Yuki pairing, and their BDSM lifestyle is completely plausible! plus, seeing Yuki be all fluffy is kinda fun. :) can't wait for what comes next!
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  • From gazelovr on February 18, 2007
    Happy Chinese New Year! I'm so glad to see that you've updated so recently, even though I've already read this chapter on the gurabiteshiyon site a while ago, I'm filled with new hope that your health has improved and that we can expect new chapters for both Depravity and Depravity 1.0. I love this story very much and can't wait to read more "depraved" hotness from your talented and beautifully erotic mind. Thanks for all your hard work and best wishes on all your endeavors this New Year.
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  • From Chikky on February 14, 2007
    Poor Shu! I feel bad for him. Hope you feel better soon yourself ^^!
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  • From GravitationInnocence on February 10, 2007
    ....OMG....u updated! THAT MEANS UR ALIVE! =] sadly i haev already read this chapter on gurabiteshyion. but i cant wait for u to update!
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  • From Udyjay on February 09, 2007
    HSDFAIOJSDIFOUAWEIORUSODIFJ *explodes*


    I truly LOVE you. XD Omg, I would be afraid to be whacked with a cane like that. XD Silly Hiro, he should have gotten a few lessons with some things before he tried them out. Man, he will feel like one true idiot after consulting it with Eiri. XD Oh, the shame.


    OMGOMGOMGOMG. Suguru's fantasy was HIZZAWT. XXXXXXXDDDDDDDD *dies* I.. omg. XD I found it one of the weirdest, oddest, yet fucking sexiest and hottest things for him to be fucked by a bunch of guys in a CLUB, ending with HIRO, RYUICHI, and TOOOOOOHHHHMMAA. Oh, my god. That was so secksy. XDDDD Odd, but fucking hot as hell. X3
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  • From Udyjay on February 09, 2007
    OMG XD YAY! More hawtness, man. I love you, you know that? XD You keep this story SOOOOO so so sexually interesting, it blows my mind. XD
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  • From Udyjay on February 09, 2007
    I wanna get those massages! *o* Holy crap, those lucky little bastards. XD

    XD Dood, that's.. AWESOME. I WANT TO MAKE SOMEONE CUM ON COMMAND! Do you know how fucking COOL that sounds?! REALLY COOL. XD Oh man, I want to do that sooooo bad. So. Effing. Bad. I'm soooooo gonna try that whenever I get someone to.. uh. Yeeeeah.


    XD WTF was with that girl? She's like.. a Bad Luck fan, isn't she? XD That's scary, stealing Shuichi's.. HAIR. XD Akward.
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  • From Udyjay on February 09, 2007
    ASDIFJASDKFJASDFKLJ THAT WAS FUCKING HAWT. D: It was soooo smexy how Eiri was totally fucking with his head, meaking him all.. squirmish, AND LET HIMSELF BE FIZZUCKED BY HIS SUB. HEHEHEHE *GIGGLESNORT* *dies*
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  • From Chikky on February 09, 2007
    Okay... I loved this chapter so much! I can't wait to see some more mentoring! Shuichi and Suguru make such a cute Uke!couple when snuggling like that, it's just a cute mental image. Can't wait for the next one. You are an amazing author!
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  • From Udyjay on February 08, 2007
    OMFG XD THAT WAS GREAT. HEHEHE. Very, very hawt. XD I liked the whole thing Eiri and Shuichi did.. it was.. new. In a way. XD


    Aww, we didn't get to see what Hiro and Suguru did? Oh well, it was a sweet moment since he got the collar. SPLEE! *HART* They are officially Dom/Sub! HEHEHE.
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  • From Udyjay on February 08, 2007
    AKDJSASKLFJSDKLFJ. OMFGGGGGGGGGGGG!! THEY WENT! YAY! And at first when Suguru left, I thought he really didnt want to be thar. BUT I BET HE DOES! AND HE'S IN SOME WEIRD LITTLE OUTFIT. AHDASJDKLASJD
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  • From Udyjay on February 08, 2007
    POOR SHUICHI. I WOULD HAVE DIED IF EIRI TOOK MY NG STUFF AWAY FROM ME. XD Poor, poor thing.

    AND LMFAOFMALMFAOMFLAMFAOMFALFO. OOH LORD, help me. XD I.. litterally CRACKED up when Tohma heard Suguru and Hiro's little.. fuckoverdaphone. XD It was hot, cause they were all.. yeah. XD And when Tohma came outta no where, I turned away and diiiiied. XDDDDDD It was cute cause Suguru was all "He had a hard-on! *GIGGLE*" That was adorable. xD Oh man.
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