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Reviews for Depravity

By : ffpandayaoi
  • From ANON - Travellyr on July 18, 2006
    Aww. That's so sweet, the ending of this chapter. I love how you write snuggling and caring in this story, and I love how Yuki's so nervous. It's cute. And Shuichi playing dirty at the game really WAS funny- XD I can certainly understand why everyone who saw him was laughing.

    And Hiro...
    ...I wouldn't trade places with Hiro tomorrow if you paid me. Ouch.
    I'm looking forward to the dressage contest- and congratulations on another fine chapter! It kept me up past my bedtime AND through the really cold part of the air conditioning. Luckily the sex was hot enough for me to stop shivering!
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  • From ANON - jlw on July 16, 2006
    i love your fan fic i can't wait till you update it again i also enjoy all your other fics
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  • From ANON - person on July 15, 2006
    Damn, that was hot. I'm gonna go take a shower now. Awesome work.
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  • From ANON - Travellyr on July 14, 2006
    Absolutely fabulous! I love Shuichi's sass translating into pony behavior, Suguru and Hiro's mix of excitement and uncertainty, the trust, the COSTUMES, and the Resort Owner! Such a lovely, classy, wicked, delightfully kinky lady. If I haven't said so earlier, I adored Shuichi biting that fangirl- how horribly rude she was, and between the bite and the backhand she certainly got what she deserved!
    ^^ The pony-play in this story is a lot of fun in general. It's a closer look at an aspect of kink I'd only skimmed- and those were the English pony-cart resorts (less sex, more stables). It's enchanting how like and how UNlike real ponies and horses pony boys and girls can be. All the best parts of a show pony, with the mucking, worming, mashed toes, and leaning optional.

    So thank you! The amount of care you take with the details of this story is wonderful, fabulous, laudable, any adjective you want, it's yours. I enjoy the links at the end- it lets me further my education. Keep writing, please, and thank you for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Your Mom's Face on July 06, 2006
    Ahaha!

    I've read the remixes, and I agree, they're a little too intense for my style as well.

    I'm extremely anti-rape.

    If you were to ever incorperate rape into this fic, I'm sorry to say that I'd have to stop following it.

    But you forgot to mention the parts of the series where Hiro has a rape fantasy including Shuichi after watching him get fucked up the ass by Yuki.

    OOH! Or where Hiro gets ass-raped by K. And later his brother. Can't remember his name.

    Then there's the bit where Taki get's raped repeatedly by Ma-kun.

    Methinks that's his name...

    Meh...

    Anywho, yeah, I just think it's hilarious that you're getting criticized by people who knew from the beginning that this would be a BDSM story because it contains important aspects of the BDSM society.

    DON'T READ STORIES YOU DON'T AGREE WITH, THEN CRITICISE IT, PEOPLE!

    Ehem, that said, I'm looking forward to the next installment of Depravity, and I can't wait to see if Shuichi wins his "reward."

    coughcoughCOLLARcoughcough

    Toodles!!
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  • From ANON - Aya-chan on July 04, 2006
    hey i've been reading 4 a while n i think it's really good, i'm really into it and so are a few of my m8s so i'd really love if u keep it going thanx luvya Aya-chan
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  • From ANON - Chikky on June 21, 2006
    Wow, this story is surprisingly really hot... thanks for writing it~
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  • From ANON - Sable on June 21, 2006
    - “What? You don’t believe me? Just who is in charge here?” He realized too late that he walked right into that one and the sound of his libido laughing at him echoed through his mind. -

    OMFG!!!! I about died laughing when I read that. Awesome! I just found this story last night and I have been doing my best to make it all the way through, unfortunately something keeps coming up and I have to take breaks. I am so glad that someone is doing a BDSM for this pair. I have been daydreaming about it since I saw that seen in the OVA.

    Okay I am going to go read some more.

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  • From ANON - Your Mom's Face on June 20, 2006
    Oh, my god, when I get into a serious relationship, I'm gonna train my partner to come to "Beam me up, Scottie!"

    Poor freak, he'll never be able to watch Star Trek again...

    Not that he'd want to...

    I'm gonna go read the next chapter...

    *whistles "Love will keep us Together" be Captain and Teneal*

    Toodles!!

    Think of me, babe, whenever...
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  • From ANON - o_O on June 16, 2006
    Wow. I'll never look at Gravitation the same way ever again.
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  • From ANON - Julianne on June 12, 2006
    Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Your Mom\'s Face on June 07, 2006
    OH-EMM-GEEE!!

    ESSOPRETTYILIKESEEEEEEES!!

    (omg, it's so pretty, I likeseys.)

    Continue, BITCH!!

    (Haha, I bet you get off on being called that! Naw, I'm just messin. I wonder how many people in this world are ACTUALLY that close-minded...)

    Meh...

    Now that I've finished all you've got so far, I don't have a goal to reach when I get online...

    I wish someone would write some BDSM shit for the Naruto crowd...

    Hey, if YOU'RE into Naruto as well...

    Meh, fat chance, there aren't many people I know that are interested in both Naruto AND Gravitation...That would just make me TOO DAMN happy...

    How I feel all shitty...

    I'm gonna go read su'um dirty to make me feel better.

    Toodles!!
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  • From ANON - darkrosedamael on February 05, 2006
    ahhh! so good. you write wonderfully.
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  • From ANON - Tyson on February 02, 2006
    ha so great i luv this story soo mch lol but yea please update soon...
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  • From ANON - O.O Kenzie on February 02, 2006
    O.O
    O.O
    O.O
    O.O.....
    *jaw drop*
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