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Reviews for Train tracks into the ocean of my despair.

By : Sciienya
  • From ANON - anon on July 17, 2006
    dude are you ever gonna post it?? i hope so
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  • From laurabryannan on November 29, 2005
    Lots of typos, and it would be easier to read if there were spaces in between your paragraphs, but a nice start. I'm curious to see what you do next.
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  • From Sciienya on November 29, 2005
    -Chapter in progress-
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  • From ANON - Brianna on November 29, 2005
    ok well that was short. But now i have to wait for you to put a new chap up. Its good, but the cliffy leaves me in frustration. Well... alls i can say is that if your next chapter is as good as your first, you've got me hooked!
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