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Reviews for Late Night Snack

By : SamuraiDevilPirate
  • From OokamiYoukai on May 06, 2011
    Nice! I'm liking how this is working...hope you continue soon! =^..^=
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  • From Synvamp on August 28, 2008
    Kawaii! So adorable - I love Sanji giving Zoro special treatment and making Nami jealous - so sweet! Can't wait to find out what happens :D
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  • From on July 08, 2007
    It's good, but you should ignore Amanda's review up there, because it's Zoro, not Zolo. They changed his name to 'Zolo' in the crappy dub they made of one piece on cartoon network. O_o
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  • From ANON - ravensfrost on September 15, 2006
    mmm nummy. Are you gonna continue with the food theme? this seems promising but I'm not gonna say much cause it's not finished but still it's promising.
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  • From ANON - pinkplaidrobot on December 17, 2005
    Pretty good concet. The story reads to quickly, you can fix this by working on elaboration. In otherwords, spend some time on each paragrah...set up the scene...describe the weather...or how the moon might refelct off Zoro's chest....you know, elaborte more. ^_^

    Oh, and you are right to spell it "zoro", don't listen to that other reviewer. The original japanese name is Zoro, not Zolo. Stupid Forkids....grr....way to rape a wonderful series. Ah well...keep writing! You have some good beginings.^_^
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  • From ANON - dawn on December 12, 2005
    wicked much better then my first try lol i love it hope u continue soon
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  • From ANON - Amanda on December 06, 2005
    I think "Zoro" is spelled Zolo.
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  • From Reyn on November 30, 2005
    Not bad for your first story ^_^ Keep it up!
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