Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for Late Night Study Session

By : keitarouchan
  • From ANON - chaz on January 26, 2006
    this i think is your best chapter when will you make the next???? any way it was a perfect story. email me back when you know it will be finished

    Report Review

  • From thebigW on January 23, 2006
    Well, the writing gets better with each chapter, fewer spelling errors, etc. Not sure if Mutsumi would do that to someone she loved, also, you had her far more calculating than I believe is in her character. Also, for her to medicate someone without knowing the contraindications of whatever other meds they might be taking could be lethal.

    O.k. Having said all that, I still like this fic, because your flow is pretty good, and I want to see what you do next. I was quite afraid there for a moment that Mutsu-san was going to take her own life, that's how good your buildup was.

    Good luck!

    W.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on January 22, 2006
    Sweet describes this to a T

    Just pure dreamy-steamy, I like, I like. Do one with Motoko!! You're damn good!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MitoFreak on January 20, 2006
    Another great chapter,
    Keep writing
    Report Review

  • From tomdj1701 on January 04, 2006
    Nice story, hope you update this one soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Nessie-chan on December 25, 2005
    btw fyi, its ADIEU... thats how its spelt... i do french after all.. but its cute.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MitoFreak on December 12, 2005
    The second chapter was great.
    Great job describing the scenes and setting up the plot.
    I think your idea to limit the number of pairings for your story is a good choice, maybe give keitaro a fling with someone else, but its clear that he and Naru have real feelings for each other in your story. Its definitely fun to watch Motoko squirm over seeing Naru and Keitaro together.
    Please write more chapters.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Contre on December 10, 2005
    A wonderful short little story. I would love to see more. My tastes usually run towards much longer stories but this one was very good. I was glad I read it.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2005
    Nice piece of work, the only comment I have is that this is just any two people having great sex, there isn't much of their personality in this story.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Raynre on December 09, 2005
    A little too fast imo, but I guess Im just spoiled. ^_^; "It was stormy... his hand was in her pants."
    Report Review

  • From ANON - K chan on December 08, 2005
    Hey its not bad just spice it up a little and use more details not gritty or anything but detailed. I encourage another story go for it
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Rider on December 07, 2005
    I am not reviewing just for the next chapter with Mokoto honest O_o; . Anyways nice little pwp lemon
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!