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Reviews for Heartbreaker

By : Kugatsu
  • From ANON - Kat on January 09, 2006
    ....XDDDDD ~mops up drool~ Naughty Kaidoh! ~snicker~ He deserves a spanking for distracting Inui like that. And awwwww sleeping Jiroh and Eiji!

    ~sniffle~ YUUTA! You love Monk-boy! Don't be mean!
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  • From ANON - YACUMO on January 06, 2006
    Excellent story keep on writting!!!
    Oh please make something for poor Dan Taichi, it is so sad that the person he loves treats him like that without considering his feelings, poor boy!!! Make Akutsu pay for being a fucking asshole with the little one!!!

    Read you later
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  • From ANON - Ahotep on January 06, 2006
    Inukai is my favorite pairing. I was really waiting for this twiwt in the plot. May they remain together for ever *falls on her knees and begins to pray*
    Nevertheless I feel a little bit sorry for Little Dan.

    By the way, I'd like to know if I may print your story so that I can read it during a train trip.

    Waiting eagerly for the next chapter
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  • From eijikun on January 06, 2006
    NYA!!!! DON'T STOP THERE!!!! YOU'RE SOO DAMN MEAN...LOL...more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hurry
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 05, 2006
    ....kinda pitying Akutsu, that scene where they broke up squeezed my heart. aaaww, and Tezuka was so cute. XD Not to mention Fuji, Eiji, and Jiroh. XD Their interactiong cracked me up.

    And Inui and Kaidoh really are so great together. ~huggles~ As always looking forward to more from you!
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  • From Houseki on January 05, 2006
    dood you actually made me feel bad for Jin!! awww i wonder what he'll do, if he'll fight back to get Kaidoh again. hmmmm?? hehe he was so mean to Taichi! but...the kid deserves it (at least in this fic) lol. i really like kaidoh and jin together for some reason. but still, inui and kaidoh are adoreable together. so it's a toughy!

    i was crackin up w/ the eiji/jiroh/fuji scene...poor fuji though..hyper active neko and boyfriend! lol

    so glad you up'd! Can't wait until the next one ^__^

    Mata
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  • From Houseki on January 04, 2006
    Well, it wasn't until recently (basically the ep where Kaidoh where's the vest that stops right around his belly button ^__~) that I got into Kaidoh, so the other day I was in a potfic mood so I took a chance with this. I hadn't had the chance to pick up where I left off until this morning....and I read every last chap up until now. So first off...I hope your next chap comes out soon cuz I'm eager to see how things between Kaidoh and Inui go, as well as if there will be a confrontation between Kaidoh and Jin over Taichi.

    In the beginning of the story, I was rooting for Inui to be with Kaidoh, but then I got into Kaidoh and Jin together, and then Inui with Hiroshi and thought that would have been a nice match up. But, of course, Jin is Jin, so I'm glad Inui is being kind in welcoming Kaidoh back and is not being an ass about it, cuz he should with all the shit he put up with b/c of Kaidoh. So I'm totally looking forward to how you play there next scenes out and especially when the make love the first time. (if they do *hoping they do!*) It'll be hard for Inui when he knows Kaidoh has been w/ Jin when he was the one who wanted to be Kaidoh's first. I hope you make an issue out of that. Cuz Inui is uber sweet and Kaidoh is uber sensetive and it would be nice for them to touch on it.

    Other than that, I've been cracking up non stop with your pairings. Fuji/Atobe?!?! *shudders* thank the goddesses that that relationship is over! lol Fuji is kawaii w/ his lil red head's *snickers* and Yuuta and Tachibana I think is really cute too. But the relationship I would like to see you branch off onto more, is Momo/Taka cuz they are so freaking cute together!! A love scene with them would have to be delicate, slow, and completely erotic *drools* The Oishi/Eiji/Ryoma triangle is a bit odd..hot in the first couple scenes, but was disappointed that Oishi ended up being a possessive bastard (Who used to hit Eiji?!?!) scary thought. Ryoma and Oishi together = Kawaii Ryoma and Eiji = Kawaii Oishi and Eiji = Kawaii All three = kawaii Evil Oishi = him Moon Volleying a ball up someone's ass....and NOT in a good way *rofl at that thought!* But yeah, hope those three work it out or something. Tezuka's you've just now touched a bit more on...and it's so adorable that his mum is all up in his business about finding a bf. Cracks me up!! But hey! I'm his GF!! (Please read Strawberries and Cream as well as Friendly Infatuation ^___^ You will understand)

    OK..wow I think you have won the award for one of my longest reviews ever! So here *hands you neko Eiji plush* Congrats! Keep up the good work, and check out my lil fic Talking Through Actions, Actions Through Talking and let me know what you think if you haven't already ^__^

    Mata Ja!

    Houseki
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  • From ANON - princess golux on January 03, 2006
    Wow. This is very sweet and the plot is delightful. I love the twistiness of all the relationships. I can't wait to read more!!!
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  • From ANON - Alleyb on January 02, 2006
    HURRAY! Finally, some Kai/Inui!!
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  • From ANON - Nanaka on January 02, 2006
    Yeeeeeeeeeeee!!!.... LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT..... CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAP
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 02, 2006
    That was the best chapter EVER!!!! I love Tezuka's mom, with extensive much loving love. lol. And Kajimoto cracks me up. The Inui/Kai was so sweet too! And the JiFu? HOT!!!! XD And Fuji does have a kink for the Orangies
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  • From MusikVibe on January 02, 2006
    This is probably the funniest chapter I've read. I just can see tezuka and kajimoto rolling around on the floor and his mom asking if they're having sex. Hilarious! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Alleyb on January 01, 2006
    YAAAAY! For Kaidoh/Inui. I've always loved Dan, but you're making me hate him. XD! Wow.. Wakato hitting on Tezuka. Craaazzzzzzzzyyy! ^>^ Hope you update really soon!
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  • From ANON - Lady J on January 01, 2006
    I was wondering what was up with Tezuka buchou! *laugh!*

    man, itd be interesting to see a pairings list when this fic is done 0.0 XD
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 01, 2006
    BIGGEST GRIN EVER! I mean.... KAJIMOTO/TEZUKA!!! I deny that sneaking into my fandom but it's such a cool pairing! Buchou love lives on! ^_^ Awwww! And Tezuka's mom is so kakkoi! ~huggles his mom~ And Kaidoh's realization it's a date followed by realizing he liked it was great!!!!!!!

    ~hugs you~
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