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Reviews for Ash the Chosen One

By : starwildfox
  • From ANON - The Black Miroku on August 26, 2006
    nice story update ASAP!
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  • From ANON - ur mom on June 10, 2006
    guy, if this was a serious story...
    i think you have more things to worry about if whether or not there were grammatical errors in this.
    and to all those people encouraging: stop, that's sad.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 10, 2006
    oh..my..god.
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  • From ANON - pokefan on January 31, 2006
    to juno.

    just because this story has no sex right away dosent make it a bad story. i personally like storys that dont have alot of sex in them, there is just to much stuff to take in on oa sex scene. so i think its a really great story.
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  • From ANON - pokemon rulez on January 17, 2006
    WOOT that was a great story i luve cat ladys
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  • From ANON - jackel sano on January 14, 2006
    What the fuck? Are you just pulling stuff out of your ass now???? retard
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  • From ANON - lickitung on January 14, 2006
    can you spell anything at all? Improve now!!!
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  • From starwildfox on January 11, 2006
    Sorry about that I'm just working on more than one at the same time.
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  • From ANON - RAW19 on January 09, 2006
    just when it's getting good you end it like that?! update soon!
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  • From ANON - joy on January 01, 2006
    sweeeeeet nice story
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2005
    b
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2005
    make more chapters
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 24, 2005
    keep it coming
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  • From ANON - starwildfox on December 23, 2005
    To answer your quetion the others are going to be looking for Ash and run into their own trouble. If anyone wants sex I'm sorry I'm not good on writing that, so I stick to wrighting what I'm good with dark adventure stories.
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  • From ANON - Juno on December 21, 2005
    Wow this story sucks. It has lack of grammatical coherency, lack of any even slightly interesting plot developement, and it seems like the characters were just thrown together, like you are just trying to live out your personal fantasies on paper, while not explaining the background. Basically, it sucked, and noone will write a background story for this when it is as horrible as it is.

    Either stop writing, or get better.

    PS- there isnt even any sex you moron
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