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Reviews for Office Fun

By : msbelle
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 13, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From lunaofeve on January 27, 2007
    i lovethe MR chiba part lol
    some of the writing did not flow well but i still liked it
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 22, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - ree on August 01, 2006
    where do you come with this, it's so hot yet really wrong too! i think you should keep it as a one-shot, to me it just better of that way.
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  • From ANON - Dear Lord on June 26, 2006
    That was a really good story... hoot details...... i mean wow...... and the ending i really like.. it was funny yet extremely ironic.... nice job
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  • From ANON - dazz on February 11, 2006
    This was great!!! I´d love to see a sequel too!!!


    REally nice and hot story!!!
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  • From ANON - candi on February 06, 2006
    i think this is so freakin hot, but one thing when you wrote than mamoru saw his workers working outside, then they must saw what happen inside, and hearing what happen too right???

    but even though u made alot of mistake, i think this is still hot.
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on December 22, 2005
    is this your first lemon? IF so not bad at all, was very good, and doable. LOL, and for a person who finds lemon "distateful" you did a good job it was sleazy but possible and decent.

    Only thing, if he can see the people working from his desk then they would have heard all that conmotion, I thought it would have been a nice touch for them to get done and the office to be watching, also you said he ripped her shirt sending buttons flying.....then at the end they get dressed and everything is okay, So work on making things consistent, but it was a good read!
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  • From ANON - Jamie on December 21, 2005
    well i liked it . . . who doesn't like office nookie!
    til next time . . .
    later
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 21, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel or something please?
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  • From ANON - pinkmooncrystal on December 20, 2005
    Loved They story. You need to write another chapter or something.
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  • From ANON - 1lover on December 20, 2005
    Oh man that was great do another chapter
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  • From ANON - 1lover on December 20, 2005
    Oh man that was great do another chapter
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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on December 20, 2005
    O_O!!!
    Hello MsBelle,
    That was...GREAT!!!
    One suggestion though...
    in the part where the bra comes off, the breasts felt relieved to be released from their confines. U refer to them as it, or they? Just a sugesstion.
    I like this story because it reminds me of me and my hubby at work, hehe.
    O_O AHEM, did I say that out loud? Oh my. U didnt hear that. :P
    Please, could you write some more chappys? It would be greatly appreciated.

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  • From ANON - anon5 on December 20, 2005
    that was really Hot. i would like to see more chapters though. have the story developed into a great series.
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