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Reviews for Fall of Shadows

By : GhostHelwig
  • From on July 28, 2007
    i hope you post another chapter realsoon this can't be happening to our favorite men poor sanzo i hope he catches up to the sob's and let goku lose on them and ride their hearts out especially kou's for what he did to him and dr nii for what he did also.
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  • From ANON - someone on December 27, 2006
    i love the story. it made me cry. Hopefully Sanzo will get a chance for payback? Best fanfiction ever so far... good job! keep it up!
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  • From ANON - squirrl on January 28, 2006
    This story is beautiful. I love Goku in this. You write him so well.
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  • From vampunk on January 25, 2006
    Amazing.

    This made me want to cry. Inside I was crying for Sanzo. I love this. Your words are so raw, so deep, its impossible not to feel with them. I have no words for how well this was, and continues to be, done. I sat in front of the review screen for several minutes trying to find the words to express how good this is. I'm still coming up blank. You have a talent, my dear. I do believe you have acquired another stalker. I will keep checking back for updates.

    Your new stalker ^_~,
    Vampunk
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  • From ANON - xangel on January 24, 2006
    hey ... gr8 story .. waitin for the update .... please please please update soon ...
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  • From ditchgospel on January 18, 2006
    Me again. Yes, I admit it, I am stalking this story, and I ran out of review space at ff.net, so...

    Just wanted to tell you that I've read this three or four times now, and every time it's just as smooth and beautifully haunting. So, I may be stalking this story, but it's haunting me, so I guess that makes us even!

    Update? Soon? Please? The suspense is killing me!


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  • From ANON - xangel on January 18, 2006
    very interesting plot plz continue ... waitin to read more
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  • From ANON - LtF on January 14, 2006
    The immense corruption and decadence (angst angst angst) in this makes my breath stop, for lack of better descriptions. The way in which you describe the downfall, in a manner of speaking, of Sanzo and his emotions that are always higher above than every one else's is simply astounding. I hate the idea of this happening to my favorite Saiyuki character, but I can't help but love this story.
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  • From ANON - squirrl on January 14, 2006
    Oh, wow. I really hope you don't leave it like that. Please, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - k on January 14, 2006
    This story was interesting, but i had to give up before finishing because the emphazising of every other word was too distracting.
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  • From Iapetus on January 10, 2006
    I must say, your idea really does have me intrigued. At first when I read your summary I thought it was going to be Doku/Kou, and so I ignored it for awhile since I don't fancy that pairing. But then I decided to try it (since the pairing was never stated), and then saw that it was non-con. I don't like reading non-con as a rule, but something about your style kept me reading. And the direction you're going in is very "real," if that makes any sense. So many people forget the whole aspect of rape being humiliating, but you didn't. This is how rape-fics should be written - and I would read more of them if they WERE written like this.

    I loved how you said that the others of the Sanzo-ikkou would kill Kou and Doku for different reasons. It fit their personalitites perfectly, and it makes the act that much more tragic. Especially when Kou will eventually snap out of this, the knowledge that he raped a respected adversary might destroy him. That's not his way of doing things. Now, that's PERFECT for Nii, who we've already seen has helped gain some control through sex (*cough*Koshuu*cough*). I can tell that you put a lot of thought into this story.

    My only bit of crit I have is regarding your parenthesis. I used to use them a lot myself, but I've come to realize that they REALLY throw off prose. If you want to say something inside the parenthesis, either work it in another way, surrounding it with commas usually works, or it is probably not even needed at all and can be taken out. I especially noticed this at the part where Doku was think-talking-whatever about Sanzo and about how he was about to be humiliated again. We know he was humiliated by being raped and violated, you didn't need to put it in parenthesis for the reader. Sanzo's reaction shows all of that to us without you needing to tell us again. If you must, write your story with them in, but when you go to revise and edit your chapter, then deal with them and either take them out or work them in somehow else. It will make your story much more smooth.

    And lastly, I'm looking forward to the Ikkou finding out and losing it. :D

    Keep up the great work.

    -Iapetus
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  • From ANON - LtF on January 08, 2006
    This story holds powerful sentiments and a very angsty/dark tone. I like it~ Keep up the good work (although Sanzo-sama getting raped is by no means good), and I hope to see an update soon! :D
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  • From ANON - jarm on January 08, 2006
    Don't like to see Kou and company that bad.
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  • From ANON - priss on January 07, 2006
    Wow! this is a way different story. Ya'know one of the best ones I've read in forever and definitly Sanzo abuse for the whole year! You are going to continue this right? This is great no ones done this kind of story before! Keep it up!
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