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Reviews for Ships in the Night

By : hawker748
  • From ANON - vegeto18 on January 11, 2006
    yo. you probably read my review on AFtermath on fanfiction. I stumbled on this and once again you outdid yourself. A masterpiece of sexual fantasy. Well done with the first chapter on vividly descrbing Tsuruko's and Keitaro's union. This applies to chapter 2 as well as Keitaro has his inner demons haunting him from his "experience." And the way you ended it, bravitisimo (sp?). Truly a great cliffhanger.

    I love this fic and hope you will continue it ASAP.

    As for Keitaro and Toshio, OH SNAP! What's worse is what Motoko will do but I think Toshio should be feared a lot more.

    Update ASAP
    rating 10/10
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  • From ANON - Love for love on January 10, 2006
    Thats a great read. Though I was looking for more Aftermath when I came on- this is perfectly, if not, better! If your ever looking for a pre-reader, or just someone for idea's look me up.
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  • From keitarouchan on January 10, 2006
    As being a fellow fan fiction writer this story kicked @ss, and was very much worth the read. Great cliff hangers at the end of the chapters. I am very VERY much looking forward to the next chapter. Please write it quickly I want to read more.
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  • From RWO on January 10, 2006
    Hehehe

    Oooh if anything like that happened to me... I'd probobly shit myself... cuz' I don't fight too well.
    Lucky for me though, I'm somewhat shy. My friend jen though I hated her for the first two weeks we knew eachother.
    now we're close... we even throw innuendos around..... it is good knowing people just as perverted as i am.
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  • From ANON - Church on January 09, 2006
    nice story here cant wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - JWM on January 09, 2006
    I have to admit that when I first read the description I was critical of the fic, but after reading it I'm impressed! So far you've managed to avoid any cliches, and I am truly impressed that you have Random-sama as a prereader. I do feel that the sex scene could have used a bit more work, but that seems unimportant next to the actual story. Please update soon!
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  • From BrianChattillon on January 09, 2006
    *On the Author's back*
    Hmm Comfy.............*Smiles evilly*

    Interesting second chap and quite an intruiging confrontation.
    I don't envy Kei-Kun at the moment though . I PITY him!
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  • From ANON - evashadow on January 08, 2006
    This story is awsome so far and i cant wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Demonic Dragon Knight on January 08, 2006
    I had been wondering what you were working on because you had stopped working on aftermath but damn I wasn't expecting this. Wow This is awsome I hope you get the next chapter up soon the suspense of a possible fight or something else happining is driving me nuts. Good work Keep it up.
    Damn this is great fic.
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  • From ANON - D on January 08, 2006
    What a strory! I mean da...Well, it is...If I could think of the words to praise this story I would write them down!
    I REALLY am dying for the next chapter! Please get it done as soon as you are able! *bows* I beg of you.
    Until then I shall wait...Good luck and truly awe inspiring story!
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  • From ANON - rune on January 08, 2006
    This is great.
    Keep up the good work.
    Till next time,
    See Ya
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  • From ANON - .......... on January 08, 2006
    omg great great great!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - kagechidori on January 08, 2006
    cliffies r evil! another great chap
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  • From ANON - kagechidori on January 08, 2006
    wow wow wow! great great story! im not good at saying which fic(or anything in a category) is my favorite but this definitly goes into my top 3 list, and ive read at least 150+(more likely lotta plus) love hina fics. vry very awsome! tsukei rocks!
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  • From ANON - BIGBOSS on January 08, 2006
    That is one hell of a cliffhanger to leave off at. The story has been incredible so far and I hope you update soon!
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