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Reviews for A Mistake

By : akumadoragon
  • From ANON - anon2 on December 03, 2010
    GAME OVER

    YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
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  • From BioYuGi on September 16, 2007
    God he didn't need to die!
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  • From ANON - jett on December 28, 2006
    Dude! When r u gonna update this fic?! It's killin me, the suspense. Come on, this fic is 2 good 2 leave alone. Hurry up already!
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  • From ANON - joe somebody on December 28, 2006
    well.... it'd be nice if you put in more chapters..... that's about it, oh, and I have no idea if it was skirt or shirt because you screwed up the wording up a bit on that
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  • From ANON - Clayton on November 28, 2006
    Hey man thats a good story, if i were you i would wright a short sequal ether about motokos greff or katiora living ether way it would be really good.


    P.S. My spelling sucks as you can see.
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  • From ANON - Damian on February 11, 2006
    NOOOO please write more, Keitaro's such a klutz there's no way he could hit the mark like that and just end it all... please don't let this end in tragedy. :'(
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  • From ANON - Vivi239 on January 31, 2006
    Is there gonna be more of this? I'd love to see more.
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  • From ANON - Church on January 19, 2006
    NOOOOO KEITAROS LIKE DEAD!! NOOOOO LET HIM LIVE MANNNNN!!!! (somehow miracuisoly even doh when stabbed in the heart)
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  • From ANON - Saiyan God on January 18, 2006
    WOW. I mean Wow. this story left my heart pounding. I... wow that is all I have to say. That is a good ending by the way don't mess with it, even do I would like to see this continued. It is perfect the way it is.
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  • From Bishonen on January 18, 2006
    ah my god you have ta write more i cant wait to find out what the other's will do when they find out abut this if you update you can have one of my Samurai flesh eating pandas and it's a mastr of the gods cry style
    With love;Imesaki Roma
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  • From ANON - Shard on January 18, 2006
    Woah, I'm left a little speechless. I knew something would go wrong but I was not expecting it to go that wrong. A riveting read and is there any way for Keitaro to survive and deal with the aftermath?
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