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Reviews for A Wolf's Embrace

By : Marlingrl
  • From ANON - anime pixie on July 16, 2006
    are you going to update anytime soon? this is a great story and it has a potential to be spectacular. i hope you update so that i can find out excatly what's going on with the men targeting karou, who saitou's friend is and what's going to happen between karou and saitou. i'm praying that you haven't abandoned your story.
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  • From ANON - Clemen on June 13, 2006
    Wow, a saitou and kaoru fic and a very good one. Hope you update soon. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
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  • From ANON - Airy on February 07, 2006
    please update as soon as u can i wanna know whats going to happen next so as soon as u can please update and when u do please email me to let me know. Ja Mata Airy
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  • From on February 01, 2006
    This was really good! I really enjoyed reading it just because I love Saito. I'm a huge fan of kenshinxkaoru, though, so I was surprised I liked it.

    ~Tera
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  • From ANON - kitsune-mika-chan on January 30, 2006
    Great fic, it's different but cool i like it very interesting! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Animalia1 on January 28, 2006
    This story is great! I like how the tension is building up in the stroy, and it will be interesting to see how Kouro feels when Kenshin returns. So on with the chapter soon please!
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  • From ANON - jeez on January 24, 2006
    hurry up with the next chappie! i'm so tired of that baka rurouni, anyway. he doesn't deserve a sweet girl like kaoru.
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on January 23, 2006
    Personally, I dont think anything is wrong with your story, and I dont think you should change it. Too many people changing their storys around, its pretty stupid to write a story, post the story and then freaking take it all down so that the reader becomes annoyed because they have to read it all over again. Seriously, if someone redid their story and then put it back up, I would just go to the chapter I left off at, and then I would be completely lost if they had changed things around. There were however, alot of things I liked about this story. Characters for one thing, im sure you got some of their atitude from the show/movie/whatever, but I'll bet you put some of your own stuff into how they acted, and I like how they act with eachother, you know pissed and then the next thing you know they fantasise about eachother. Second thing I like would be the length of the chapters, I love it when people make nice long chapters, so its like a real story and doesnt seem to rushed. And last is the fact that I couldnt find too many typo's so it wasnt that bad. ^_^ Anyways, when you move and you get your computer all set up again, email me... I am truely excited to read more. My email is DemonMina@yahoo.com. Write me when the next chapter is put out.
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  • From ANON - Clemen on January 20, 2006
    I can't believe I have miss this story. Great job. It a well-written Saitou and Kaoru pairing. Look forward to next chapter. Hope everything comes out ok with your move. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
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  • From Daniella on January 20, 2006
    Thanks so much for making a SaitouxKaoru fic! I been looking forever on this site only to find two but both weren't even finished! Thanks again, update soon!
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  • From ANON - gretel_chan on January 20, 2006
    I'm enjoying where you're going with this story. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - anime pixie on January 20, 2006
    wonderful chapter. have fun moving and good luck with the writing. i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter with saitou's friend and karou. i'm loving how the tension is building between karou and saitou.
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  • From ANON - anime pixie on January 20, 2006
    cool story. i hope that you have a new chapter up soon. i look forward to reading more of your story.
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  • From ANON - JBella on January 20, 2006
    I'm so glad you took up this challenge. I adore alternate pairings, and I love Saito, so this story caught my interest right away. I think you've done a good job so far setting up background and a plot foundation. As far as suggestions, you've definitely established that an attraction is forming, but to keep them in character, I think they need to fight it (as hard as that is for me to say 'cause I can't wait for the good stuff!). Sometimes the hottest romances start when people "act" as though they can't stand each other. With Saito's sarcastic nature and Kaoru's temper, I see huge possibilities of some very funny interactions between them. And then, if Saito should get hurt dealing with the group after Kaoru... Another thing, if Kenshin feels he's not good enough, how's he gonna react when he finds out? They basically have the same past.

    Good luck with this story, and I hope you update, soon and often!!!
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