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Reviews for Offerings of the Goddess

By : bweb
  • From LunaAddictus on April 24, 2008
    Very nice! Romantic, steamy, yet not too over-the-top. Great work!
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  • From 0neiromantiC on October 03, 2007
    w00t~!
    I had to hold back a fit of girlish laughter so I wouldn't scare my mum xD!
    Good job, sounds like a useful thing..the spell of soundless and spiffy DO NOT DISTURB stuffies :D

    w/♥

    .:D:.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 03, 2007
    This is a very well writen and cute, hot story! I'm glad that I read it.
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  • From jsoc on February 13, 2007
    Nice!
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  • From ANON - Taijen Hono on August 10, 2006
    Nice Flow in the story, a little over done with the language, but still really good. Just a note a sequal would be really nice say starting the next morning or so. As it is your decision so do with it as you please. Peace Out
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  • From ANON - Bubble-chan on July 20, 2006
    I was so happy to find a good Ah! My Goddess story. This is the first one I've found that is about Bell and K and pretty much keeps them in character. This was a great story, I only wish you wrote others. I would read any Ah! My Goddess story you write.

    Lexi AKA Bubble-chan
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  • From thebigW on February 02, 2006
    Well, somewhere in oblivion, Celestine just shuddered and has broken out in a cold sweat. The only thing possibly OOC was Bel in nothing but the apron, and not being at all nervous about it, because you know she would have been thinking to herself, 'What if K isn't ready for this?'.

    Having said that, I also wish you had delved more deeply into Belldandy's time of bliss (I agree with Jocko's review in that vein). It's just got to be better for a goddess, I'm thinking.

    Having written all that, this was very, very sweet, you have talent, and please write more.

    Ja ne.

    W.
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  • From ANON - JockoMegane on January 30, 2006

    Not bad. :)

    It could have used more in the actual sex act, but it's always sweet to read about Keiichi and Belldandy finally getting some time alone.
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  • From ANON - moi on January 26, 2006
    that was good.
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  • From ANON - Star on January 26, 2006
    I loved it! Good work on the story, I think you hit the personalities perfectly, well except for urd buying her own ice cream lol. Any ways good job and its about time somebody made a oh my goddess fanfic.
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  • From NarsheDelvar on January 25, 2006
    Ohhh, I like that. =D Done very well. ^_^ And everyone was basically in character, so it made it that much better. I could so see Belldandy and Keichi do something like that.

    It was also kewl that you started it after the movie. Loved it, and the anime. =D

    Keep up the good work. ^__^
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  • From ANON - dan on January 25, 2006
    write another one for ah my goddess
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  • From ANON - Dan on January 25, 2006
    very nice writing and not to hard core for the the to people involved. i think it fits pefectly to the way the serious would have gone if it would have continued.
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