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Reviews for Breakfast

By : YaoiGoddess
  • From Hestia on October 21, 2007
    Very cute!!! Hmm, maybe I'll have to write the lemons you are avoiding . . .
    I love the dialogue!
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  • From ANON - Sith Master of Doom on October 08, 2006
    Hi
    Cool idea for a story.
    Baaaaaaad choice of a particular word/s. "Sweatdrop" and/or "sweatdropped"
    This is NOT a verb. It is a visual gag used only in "art". A "sweatdrop" is a NOUN. As in it is an object. Please try to find the correct emotion for the situation such as "was embarrased" or something that more accurately describes the emotion of the character.

    I'm not saying this to be mean. I want to explain why one shouldn't use it. As I said before I like the story choice and would like to see more chapers but PLEASE, don't treat "sweatdrop" as a verb.

    THank you for your time in reading this.

    Your Lord and Master
    Foamy (I wish)
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  • From ANON - Sitian on February 12, 2006
    NYAAA! XD I loved it!! I want moooore!
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  • From neosildrake on January 28, 2006
    oh, a second Hisoka/Killua/Gon story! No lemon yet but maybe later? mmmhhh *yummy* threesome *drool*
    I know how hard it is to write a threesome... and it will probably the first with this pairing! I can hardly wait... Even if Hisoka seems to be OOC, but I like him this way. Everything except non-con. ... Why are most Hisoka ffs non-con anyway. Either that or he's with Illumi and both are bastards...
    Well, whatever, write more!
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