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Reviews for Night Out

By : JetMykles
  • From ANON - Miss Macabre on February 02, 2006
    I love these sorta chats between the younger teammates...especially when Ken is a little bit slow...
    That was a hilarious chapter, and I most definately am looking forward to the next...
    and the next...
    and so on and so forth...: )

    Kisses and cookies!
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  • From ANON - KD Sarge on February 01, 2006
    oh, you just get better! I am loving this, every chapter I love it more. What a treat!
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  • From Blythe on February 01, 2006
    I really love this story and I think you're doing an unbelievable job with it! You've captured all of the boys very well and the dialogue is outstanding, very human. I'm very anxious for the reunion!
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  • From ANON - MikaSamu on January 31, 2006
    Utterly delightful! Its wonderful to have a story in which Aya is the careful campaigner to convince Yohji to have a relationship -- and you've beautifully captured how Aya would apply the same care and determination to that campaign that Aya applies to all his missions. Seeing the more relaxed and humorous Aya that was hinted at in Gluhen and Side B is terrific. I really enjoy the humor, phrasing, and careful attention to the characters. The last chapter was not so full of coincidents that I failed to be submerged fully in the story -- to the contrary, I felt Yohji's, Aya's and Omi's frustration, and relief when Aya was willing to relax a bit from full Abyssian mode to say farewell to Yohji. Very nice touch in his observation that Omi wanted to talk to him. I'm anxious for more.
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  • From ANON - Kikvws on January 31, 2006
    Excellent, oh my, this is excellent! Eager for more, loving your take on Aya!
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  • From jukeboxcsi on January 31, 2006
    I posted a reply in the yahoo group, but thought I'd put something here too :^D This is really well written and flows smoothly. The scenes are easy to visualize in my head as I read along, and I'm thrilled it is more than a PWP sexual romp. Not that PWP's aren't good too, it's just that I tend to like it more when there is a story with the sex *grin* Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Silver45 on January 31, 2006
    Oh, dear Lord! I just found this series today and I am hooked. PLEASE! I need more! This is worse than crack! I like how you totally seem to have everyone in character! Very good job! I am loving every bit of it and will wait with baited breath for the next installment. (soon I hope!)
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  • From ANON - KD Sarge on January 30, 2006
    Waaahhhh! Nooooo!!!! MORE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Miss Macabre (not signed in) on January 30, 2006
    YAY!
    oooh nice chapter - but I hope Ken notices Omi and leaves his thoughts about Aya alone!
    *hands over cookies*
    Faster!
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  • From ANON - E.T. on January 30, 2006
    Yay *claps hands* I just love slutty Aya, not Aya who's all repressed with a 10ft pole up his butt! You've done a fantastic job with the characters, squee!!!!! LOL. Anyway I love it and excitedly await more :) *sigh* Aya and Yohji makes me drool! Oki-day, please keep up the good work, I bow to your superiority at making Yohji and Aya sooooo HOT together, goodbye, I'm loving you!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Miss Macabre (not signed in) on January 30, 2006
    More, More! Faster!

    (as in write more faster...not whatever else it sounds like...)
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  • From ANON - tokageMusume on January 30, 2006
    This is such a satisfying story! I loved reading it. Thanks so much for publishing it. You hit all the high spots of a good old-fashioned Catch Me If You Can sort of get-together story and hit them all perfectly. It was amusing and easy to read and the sex scenes were bleeding-from-the-eyes good!

    "Aya poured into the arms of a man, allowing himself to be momentarily caught. Big, muscled arms pulled him close and he rested his chin on one wide shoulder. He opened violet cat eyes and immediately focused on Yohji. Even across the room, Yohji felt the heat of it, the promise. The plea. The demand. “/Come and get me/.” " --- Very, very classic and very, very well done! Absolutely perfect. Thanks again so much for publishing this.

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  • From ANON - KD Sarge on January 29, 2006
    Hurray for pure sex! Sorry if this posts twice, it didn't seem to go first time. This chapter was hot! thanks so much.
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  • From ANON - hobbes on January 29, 2006
    Really enjoyed this story - thank you! The boys are very hot!
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  • From ANON - Miss Macabre (not signed in) on January 29, 2006
    Mmmm...Delicious - Hey! what the hell are you doing reading reviews!? You should be writing the next chapter!!!
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