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Reviews for Cruel Demise

By : cynicalcorpse
  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2003


    A Cruel Demise is what happens when someone comes to realize that you have not written anymore chappies.

    I love this story it is too cute despite the Blood-lust-revenge, though I have to wonder if Kaoru, being the fammed assasin that she is could possibly live very long as an assasin with the way she spouts off her thoughts...i.e. Telling Sanosuke her life story and intentions. I'd think the Battousia wouldn't be so...uninformed about who would want to kill him, if the certain person spread it all over town in even her drunken slurr...he still might be a bit cautious...ne? But I might be spouting nonsense myself as it is your story and you can design the characters mind in the way you please.

    Still a good story Please write more.
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  • From ANON - Kaoshino on July 08, 2003
    No one can win the battle of the sexes.
    There's always fraternizing with the enemy.
    (I forgot where I read that, and who said it.)
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  • From ANON - Rekka\'s Angel on July 08, 2003
    Wonderful job. Another great chapter! LOL, I really liked reading the sake adventure, that was great! So, new feelings are arising between the two. ^_^ I can't wait to read more! I like how you're developing the relationship between them, and how it's done so realistically. They wouldn't fall head over heels for each other just like that, it would take time, just the way you're doing it. So great job with that. Again, I look forward to reading more soon. Ja ne.
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  • From ANON - Poppy on July 08, 2003
    Very interesting story. I can't wait to see what happens laters on. The perspectives are interesting and I like how you've made the characters different yet kept the the same to fit the format of the story.
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  • From ANON - shadow on July 07, 2003
    *in british accent* good show, chap! very good!
    no, really, though. i liked the chapter. i still think that the way they swear alot is somewhat out of period, but the story is really interesting; especially the way we have insights as to what the characters are thinking. keep it up; can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - NobodysAngel on July 06, 2003
    i really like how this is going. Its not to dark the humor draws the reader from the angst n stuff. please updaate soon and E-mail me when you update. i unfortunetly am not a memner of the site*sigh* SummerNAngel@yahoo.com PLEASE tell me when you update?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
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  • From ANON - Lady Neko on July 06, 2003
    Whoa I just found this site and by reading this I'm glad I did! I was always wondering if anyone else noticed that Kaoru was able to drink a lot of sake. Okay I'm rambling. This is a great story with an awesome plot and a twist to the Rurouni universe. I can not wait until you update again.
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  • From ANON - Rekka\'s Angel on July 02, 2003
    *Squeal* Ahh, this is so great! I love how Kaoru is such a bad ass in this and Kenshin is not his usual rurouni self (even though I love him like that as well). The plot is good and constantly keeping me interested and wanting more. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading the next update. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Leiliiani on June 18, 2003
    FUNNY!! I really really like Kenshin in this fic, he's just TOO much :-D

    Anyhoos, always eager to obey thmmanmmands of Kenshin the Sex God, so here's my review!! ^_^

    Will be checking abck every now and then for new chappies! :) Lata!


    ~~Leiliiani

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  • From ANON - RekkaShinen on June 13, 2003
    Kenshin the sex god...Hmmm.... *falls over drooling at the picture* I love it. *recovers quickly* It's so good I'm gonna give ya some cookies!!!! *hands over the rest of her cookies* Don't worry, I know where my dad hides the rest of the cookies! But before I go on a raiding spree, love the story! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!! *runs off to find the cookies*
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  • From ANON - Dreamwarrior on June 10, 2003
    Lovely fic so far. I love how it's angsty and humorous. deffidently different, but in a good way. Keep up the good work, and dont forget to update soon!
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  • From ANON - RekkaShinen on June 04, 2003
    I love it!!! You've easily combined humor and angst!!!! That's my kinda style! I personally do romantic comedy myself... It's a great fic, you've pretty much had me rolling off the chair. All ve tve to say is, you've got a true fan here!!!! Hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Nunichan on June 02, 2003
    I really like your story, these 'ideas' or philosophies you use are really awesome. Please continue to write this,although longer chapters will most defenitely be appreciated. ^-~
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