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Reviews for Dragon\'s Dance

By : Aireroswen
  • From ANON - MikaSamu on September 06, 2006
    Hurray you're back! Another wonderful chapter. Realistically showing how badly Aya and Yohji have been wounded, and how they respond to not only to the situation but to each other does not make the chapter slow, but provides the depth that makes your stories so terrific. Its going to be hard to wait for the next chapter, but thank you for coming back to this story.
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  • From ANON - memorietrail on September 06, 2006
    Oh wow i do hope you put more up soon.
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  • From maiafay376 on September 06, 2006
    I really like the flow here, the dialogue and decriptions are well done. I really start to feel for Aya's character, the stubbornness and nobility that he retains--even when injured. Sometimes it seems like a vice for him, but maybe later on he can chill a bit. I also enjoyed the dream sequence--as it was trippy and gory--the best sort!

    I look forward to the next chapter!

    *hugs*

    Carrie
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  • From ANON - Arasoi on June 30, 2006

    Damn.

    That had EVERYTHING I like in a Weiß fic- good idea, excellent writing, interesting villain, plenty of Aya (so I'm a fan, sue me), great fight scenes that were realistic and horrible like they SHOULD be... It was *exactly* the type of fic I go for. I'm very interested to see were this goes...
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  • From ANON - E.T. on June 18, 2006
    *bounces* please, oh please, oh please, oh please update soon!!!
    I really loved the first chapter and I don't want to wait long for another!
    You write extremely well :) and I LOVE Aya and Yohji together
    Please update soon :)
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  • From maiafay376 on April 27, 2006
    Very well done. I don't know the fandom too well, but I can say these are not just cookie cutter characters, and you write them with depth. I like the fact you are not afraid to put a little gore in your tales, and I hope--a little non con as well. The intriguing villian at the end seems to scream "NON CON" and I hope you heed his cries...

    For the rest of the story: it had good flow, nice dialog, (nothing cheesy) and a polished delivery. Plus, everyone seemed to be real, not over the top or fake in any way. Good job over all.


    Looking forward to the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - Jukebox on April 19, 2006
    Oh wow! Very intense and exciting first chapter. Since character death wasn't listed in the warning, I'm going to take that as a positive sign that Yohji and Aya didn't die *grin* But, I'm very anxious to see what happens next and how they survive (if they survive, which I hope so). Well written and flows, it was easy to visualize the scene in my head as I read along. Good start!
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  • From ANON - moimoi-chan on April 14, 2006
    oooh me likeys. I can't wait for an update!
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