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Reviews for Nenju

By : 3Jane
  • From ANON - E-pony on October 02, 2006
    Nenju
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  • From ANON - M.R.M. on October 02, 2006
    You're late! :-( Where's the update??? lol If it's because of less updates, that doesn't mean we don't want more!!
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  • From ANON - xXx on September 25, 2006
    Gashes are red, bruises are blue, this is how much I love you! ^^ Your story, that is! Yeah, sorry - just thought that sounded like more of a "mugenish" thing to say opposed to some sappy thing. >_> So yeah, nice filler chapter - rather, that's what it SEEMED like it was - so I hope you put up more soon! And yay, I wasn't depressed when reading it this time! Not EXTREMELY depressed, anyway. :)
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  • From ANON - elict on September 25, 2006
    This, my friend, must be one of the best things I've read in my life. The plot is wonderfully well thought of, it is easy to fit into the ending of the series, as well as the culture and ways of Japan in that time. So excellent!

    The plot alone would almost be enough to keep me glued to the screen through the whole thing, but then you add the amazing characterizations! All of the three main-chars are perfect, both in the way they were at the beginning, as well as the way they respond to the happenings in the story, and how they grow. Both as individuals and as a group.

    The other characters are wonderful as well. I even find myself fall in love with the OC's, they are very easy to fit in to the story and the Samurai Champloo style.

    I absolutely adore this story. Have you written more? Eh... I'll go check your profile ^^

    Can I rec it at my website?

    Hugs /elict
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  • From ANON - BlueVixen2071 on September 25, 2006
    Well I sure hope Fuu never finds out about Yatsuha! And I hope all that "discomfort" isn't foreshadowing, but then she got comfortable at the end, so I relaxed. Did Jin say that he liked Yuki romantically, or what?? Sometimes the conversations are confusing, but I think I got the gyst of it..
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  • From ANON - SassieLassie11988 on September 25, 2006
    If that Mugen doesn't start behaving I'm gonna bend him over my knee and spank the crap out of him! ::grins wickedly:: Hm, that sounds like a good idea! ::grabs kicking and screaming Mugen and throws him over my knee:: SPANK! SPANK! SPANK! lol Now go home to your Fuu and behave! ::Mugen rushes back with his nonexistent tail between his legs:: Ah, Melanie and Kendrick...such a pretty song, so it eases the tension as I read this. I seriously was like, no more heartache! I can't take no mo!!! XD
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  • From ANON - Silent_Aura on September 25, 2006
    Unpredictable, as always - lovely, dahling!
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on September 25, 2006
    Ahhh the plot thickens, I can hardly keep all the dasderly villians apart, our poor trio is so surrounded by danger. I am happy for the Jin/Fuu heart to heart, it helped clear some stuff up.
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  • From ANON - SweetFaith06 on September 21, 2006
    Oy, why are you doing this to me?? I feel just awful, now...everything's just going wrong, and I HATE reading stuff that makes me feel terrible during my studies/classes. :( I love all the characters, so I feel torn...I hate Yatsuha for ruining everything!!
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  • From ANON - Mitzi on September 20, 2006
    Take a bow, the night is over
    This masquerade is getting older
    Lights are low, the curtain's down
    There's no one here
    [there's no one here, there's no one in the crowd]
    Say your lines but do you feel them?
    Do you mean what you say when there's no one around? [no one around]
    Watching you, watching me, one lonely star
    [one lonely star you don't know who you are]

    Chorus:


    I've always been in love with you [always with you]
    I guess you've always known it's true [you know it's true]
    You took my love for granted, why oh why
    The show is over, say good-bye


    Say good-bye [bye bye], say good-bye


    Make them laugh, it comes so easy
    When you get to the part
    Where you're breaking my heart [breaking my heart]
    Hide behind your smile, all the world loves a clown
    [just make 'em smile the whole world loves a clown]
    Wish you well, I cannot stay
    You deserve an award for the role that you played [role that you played]
    No more masquerade, you're one lonely star
    [one lonely star and you don't know who you are]


    (Chorus, repeat)


    Say good-bye [bye bye], say good-bye


    All the world is a stage [world is a stage]
    And everyone has their part [has their part]
    But how was I to know which way the story'd go?
    How was I to know you'd break
    [you'd break, you'd break, you'd break]
    You'd break my heart?


    I've always been in love with you
    [I've always been in love with you]
    Guess you've always known
    You took my love for granted, why oh why
    The show is over, say good-bye


    (Chorus)


    Say good-bye [bye bye], say good-bye
    Say good-bye

    - "Take a Bow": Madonna


    ~*~*I HATE Madonna, but I LOVE this song, and I think it fits this story so well. The interpretation of who this is between is up to you, because I honestly don't know who it is yet, myself. ^^;


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  • From ANON - Jay on September 19, 2006
    Nice! But evil evil ending!! -shakes fist-
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  • From ANON - Leticia Faye on September 19, 2006
    Hmm. I really don't like how Jin handled the situation since when a woman chooses, that is IT! End of discussion! Poor Mugen had to overhear that crap and now he'll probably lose her because of that final act of desperation! Why do you do this to me?? Why?? :( I'm so incredibly sad right now! I've been able to think of nothing else!!
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on September 19, 2006
    I love how you bring back the secondary characters into this story, very orginal twists.
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  • From ANON - xxx on September 18, 2006
    this is all i can take, THIS IS HOW A HEART BREAKS!!!!!!!!!!! X*-(
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  • From ANON - Silent_Aura on September 18, 2006
    I think I'm gonna throw up...I don't feel well...ugh. >
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