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Reviews for Ichiban Desho

By : quamp
  • From ANON - "guest" on September 28, 2006
    This is horrible. The only way to improve your writing it to stop it completely, Quamp.
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  • From ANON - Elilenti on August 20, 2006
    Sorry, but don't you think, your style is kinda ... too cold?
    I can't empathize with the characters, nor can I imagine the environment, even knowing the anime.
    I think our styles are totally black and white. Maybe a canny intermixture of both would help.
    Do your best, as I do,
    Elilenti
    PS: Btw ... I have to apologise for some, maybe, strange sentences. I'm not English, but German, so I needed some help from an English friend. She corrected my translation (which I did for some practice for school), but still there seems to be a noticeable difference between English and German prose.
    Still, even in English, your texts are way too cold.
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