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Reviews for The Demon's Den

By : MrsTsukiyono
  • From ANON - TimeFlys on July 17, 2006
    Once again I really enjoyed it. You really captured the inner struggle that Ryo is forced to go through. Some scence were a little to graphic for my taste, but where still writen well. (it was scary how easly I could picture every detail in the torture scence.) My only hopes are that: A.) You continue to write this well through-out the rest of this story
    B.) Update soon
    C.) Still have a happy ending for Ryo and Dee by the end of the story
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Jadehex on July 01, 2006
    Well happy birthday too you I hope you enjoyed it!

    I loved the chapter, it would seem things are starting to heat up a little on Ryo's end. He knows he wants Dee but does dee feel the same way? And what's he going to think when he finds out the truth? I don't know but I can't wait to find out either
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  • From ANON - sumblink2 on June 30, 2006
    MAn this story just keeps getting better and better, Please UPDATE SOON ans I'm glad you found a beta, now you can start writting chapters more often...I hope?
    Jk
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  • From ANON - TimeFlys on June 29, 2006
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!! For a gift i give you a big kiss- from Ryo!! ( Pushes Ryo forward) "No!!!!! He's mine! (Dee) Dee you should share (TimeFlys) NO!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well i tried.... hope you still have a great birthday, and good job on your latest chapter!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on June 27, 2006
    wowee!! i luv it!! hell i'd rather be kissed by a toad then Rose *shudders* But Dee got bitten by a werewolf? Does this mean he might be one too? Well whatever he is I really hope he and Ryo end up together. And Bikky, aye that was really sweet of him to try and help Ryo out. Wish there was a safer way for him but ya know, still kinda sweet :) Luv ur fic!!
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  • From ANON - sumblink2 on June 18, 2006
    OMG!!!!
    You just have to update soon PLEASE!!!!!
    So good! So great. Please update soon
    Sooo soon that it should be now!!!
    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - maylee on June 18, 2006
    Fun story! A few typos here and there, but the I found the plot to be entertaining. I really enjoyed the Ryo and Berkley scenes, and I look forward to more interaction between Dee and Ryo. I look forward to reading more! Please continue writing this!
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  • From ANON - Jadehex on June 18, 2006
    Definately good! So Dee and Bikky are both humans but many of the others are vampires and what not. okay this should be good.
    I wonder when Dee is going to figure Ryo is a vampire. I don't think he'd care personally, I mean, I think he'd be like Bikky wanting to help look out for him. This is definately good I hope there is more soon!
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  • From ANON - Lillie on June 17, 2006
    This looks like an interesting idea, but you really need a beta to catch things like apostrophes, capitalization, etc. For example, "allot" is incorrect the way you've used it.

    I know this is AU and all, but I see fangirl/boy Japanese sneaking in. It's not necessary and is usually just annoying, especially in FAKE.

    All in all, this is a promising start and I will be interested to read more.
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