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Reviews for No Escaping Fate

By : MoonsBlood
  • From Sandywriter on October 12, 2008
    Well...you have a good writing style but your ending just feels like a cliched cop-out. Kinda disappointing after all that good plotting. Thanks for your hard work.
    ~S
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  • From ANON - Kasey on December 31, 2006
    OKAY WHAT THE FUCK!?
    DUDE! My brother walked in because I was hunched over the computer and he said that he heard me yelling, screaming, laughing histerically and crying and whispering to myself!!!
    He thought I was going insane...and why? Because of thsi story!!!!!!!!! Seriously wtf!?
    I need more and I'm looking for those sequels and if I cant find them I may just cry for the rest of my life?
    Answer me one question...Did he live?
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  • From ANON - Kasey on December 31, 2006
    Okay....I've tried and tried to be a good girl and just sit here reading until I finished, but here on the eighth chapter...I've found myself, in a bit of a dilemma. You see...Everytime I think something is going one way, it turns and goes the other. I had absolutely no idea that Ryuichi was going to "lead Shuichi [Neo] into the light" more or less that he will be willing to go along with Ryuichi's lil scheme.
    Really though should I call it a scheme?
    I honestly have no idea. I'm afraid to think they will make it, yet I'm apprehensive of what to think about Yuki and Shuichi. What will happen there? He cant just disappear. Then it hits me...Death. Isnt this where the story is going? I have no idea. Honestly I'm slightly intimitated. I dont know whether or not to laugh, cry, yell, or be happy.
    You're writing is unpredictable...and if any person dislikes the story...I will personally kick their sorry ass. They obviously havent read something as, on the lines of fanfiction, great as this. They are just crazy fan girls/boys that are driven on wild Yuki sex.
    I appreciate your talent, and I had to make that made known.
    Thank you,
    Kasey aka Toni'sGirl [if you go onto the Fanfiction.net site]
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  • From ANON - maria on August 23, 2006
    no this cant end.. its too good to end, i gave up going out with my friends and going to the mall so that ic ould finish reading this but now that its over i wonder more and more about if the life that Shuichi ended up chosing was the real one? or was that the one in the coma? i dont know what else to say but that this story is amazing and even if the characters had been orginal i would've read it all the same, you should do some serious thinking about becomming an author... anyways, ja ne
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  • From ANON - mara on August 04, 2006
    Great twist at the end!!! I was totally clueless!! Anyway, you better do write a sequel, because that just didn't seem finished. Actually, it did, but at the same time I want to see them together some more! I'm just a sucker for the happy couple stuff! Great job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 04, 2006
    ooh, th
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on August 04, 2006
    Oh My Fucking God!!!!! That was so fucking awesome...what a fantastic last chapter....damn...cannot wait for the sequals...you are so fucking amazing!...love you to death.....catti
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  • From ANON - fujinakaheero on August 04, 2006
    I have to say just one thing to describe what I'm feeling right now. Wonderful. Just.. wow, really good. A wonderful twist to the whole thing. Very well written, you can tell the plot was well thought out what with how the ending was so rushed, a lot of stories do that which is annoying but yours left you in suspense right until the end, making you sit on the edge of your seat to find out what would happen next so bravo! I give you my cudos, it was a good read and I look forward to your sequel. So when i see it up and about on here expect another review from me.
    So until then.
    Ja ne!
    Fujinakaheero
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  • From ANON - mystice on August 04, 2006
    OMG! I didn't expect that.. though i had this feeling that shu's really the person

    eiri has been talking to in the hospital... hmm... you really got me hooked on this...

    great fic! that was soooo unexpected...


    i'm looking forward to your sequels....


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  • From ANON - mystice on July 30, 2006
    ooooohhhh...i wonder who is Yuki's comatosed confidante...??? hmm... to get the answer to that, please write more! more! i'm looking forward to more of this fic ; )
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  • From ANON - NightstarAngel on July 27, 2006
    PLEASE PLEASE don't tell me that Shu is the one on a coma! It kind of felt that way in the last part of chapter 13. It would make the story really good in my opinion but it will make me fell very, very sad. So, if he is the one in the coma, those that mean that the life you are showing is actually the book that Eiri is writting and telling Shu. Anyway you are a very good writter please don't stop writting. This is one the best Gravitiation story that I had read. I hope that you update soon ja ne! ;>
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  • From ANON - KakashiSanzo5790 on July 25, 2006
    good...please hurry and get it up!
    omfg...i love this fic!
    this is the first gravitation fic ive read since nine month torture ended....and i have to say...i regret not reading gravitation fics if this is how good they are! ^.^
    ive been sitting in front of my computer all damn day reading the 13 chapters you have up...and i have to say...i wish that there was more up right now!
    im dying!...i need to know!....please tell me hell go back to yuki!...it would kind of suck if he didnt!
    please hurry and update!
    im dying to know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - kallipso on July 25, 2006
    Keep it coming, what happens next?
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  • From Blythe on July 24, 2006
    Oooh! A mystery! Can't wait to find out more about Eiri's confidante! I've been enjoying your story from the beginning and am very much looking forward to another chapter. It's fun to see how Shu's demeanor shifts depending upon where he is and who he's with. I like that he's a more complex character in your story. He's too often portrayed as one dimensional. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - mara on July 23, 2006
    Great chapter! I thought the song selections for this one were especially great and you really left me wanting more now!! Who is the person that Yuki visits in the hospital after hours??? I also hope that Yuki will go see Shuichi or vice versa, even if they don't get back together. They really need some more talking or something. At this point though, I really don't quite know where you are going due to that mystery person. mhh, hope you keep writing. Can't wait for more.
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