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By : hawker748
  • From ANON - egg_aff on July 20, 2006
    Wow. I am stuck between being freaked out, and turned on... o_o;
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on July 19, 2006
    Again with the setting of higher standards. A journey into the dark side of sexuality that spun out of control. Excellent work!
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  • From ANON - Andrew J. Talon on July 19, 2006
    God, that's just... Twisted. (shudder) Was that Yuki's plan from the start? Oi... Good work, but it's incredibly twisted.
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  • From ANON - Wouldn't you like ta know? on July 19, 2006
    oh.. my.. god..
    this.. this was really good.. extremely well written..
    but.. the ending just freaked me out..
    *shudder*
    well.. for some reason that wasn't really that much surprising..
    good luck on future fics/lemons..
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  • From ANON - Fenrir on July 19, 2006
    Wow...thats the only words that i can think of when you write your stories. I have read every single one....twice...okay Loss and redemtion I read about 3 times before I read the sequal which still think you should finish. It's great...I LOVE IT! OMG...man...you got some skills when it comes to love hina. I especially love it when you do Keitaro and Motoko pairings, they're my favorite. Keep it up...Love them....out-freking-standing. Love and Peace yo.
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  • From ANON - burger on July 16, 2006
    oh my....
    if i was keitaro i'd be so confused.
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  • From ANON - Archimedeas on July 16, 2006
    Still awesome. So, so awesome.

    One thing though. I hope this isn't too much to ask but please, for the love of God, don't make Keitaro a fucking rapist snuff aficionado. I mean a little bit of that is okay, this last chapter kicks ass and so did the chapter with Motoko. But let me tell you, if you write a chapter where the guy rapes and batters Su or something while she cries and protests, I am giving up fan-fiction as a whole. Then again, you haven't let me down yet so I doubt you'd end up going in that direction.

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Cam on July 16, 2006
    This is the hottest story on this freaking site. I kid you not.
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  • From ANON - Emperor Jaden on July 15, 2006
    Wow...just...Wow. Amazing work you got her, it's really good. Please Write more, and if Motoko doesn't kill/neuter him, I would like Naru or Shinobu next please. Naru because she's had it coming to her, and it just seems that the way she treat him would trigger his insanity. and Shinobu? I think Keitaro would just go insane and fuck her next.
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  • From ANON - The Cat on July 11, 2006
    God yes, nice one. How about having him fuck Shinobu next, see how she matches up to her mother? Shinobu would do anything for him... Or maybe he should have them both at once...
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  • From ANON - Archimedeas on July 10, 2006
    You sir are the greatest Love Hina fanfiction writer that ever lived. For the love of God, continue this story. Include the girls, I don't know. This story was just so...Fucking awesome in a way I can't put my finger on. I didn't even whack off to the smut or anything, I mean I'm reading it and I realize that this is truly a well-written story with provocative subject matter instead of the usual plotless, mindless bullshit that gets put up here. I never thought I'd present this compliment to a fanfic author, but this story is really Bukowski-an. The shower thing where he's having a nervous breakdown is maybe a little excessive, but now that I think about it maybe not. I just hope it doesn't turn him into a fucking rapist or something for the rest of the story like so many Love Hina writers are fond of writing.

    Anyway, I really hope you continue writing this story. And maybe get a little lighter with it, but not too much. Hang on to that grit, you know, it's real. It's there. Real good story, Hawk. Keep it up.
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