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By : Despina

From ANON - Chikky on September 25, 2006
I love this story so of course I will give good reviews! I would cry if this story was left the way it is right now... I'm so into it! Can't wait for the next chapter! Hopefully Yuki and Shu figure out their problems soon!
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From ANON - Kibou32 on September 25, 2006
Hey!! Am I so glad to see a new chapter today!! This is a bit of a compromise... as you have so kindly put up 2 chapters of the 3 I asked after chapter six. Hmm. So Tohma is human after all, huh? I mean, I haven't read the whole Gravitation Manga to actually understand Tohma... but I kind of liked the fact that you made him human. At least A bit. So... if you write any one-shots of Tohma/Shuichi pairing with an angry Eiri Yuki at one side, would you let me know? And... this is awfully forward of me for asking... but if you have any further volumes of Gravitation manga... do you think you could send them to me as scanlations? hehehe... very poor person right now.
This was great. Keep it up!!
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From ANON - bluesnake40 on September 25, 2006
Yes, another chapt ... yes!!!... was excited to see you've posted an update but how can you leave us hanging? What is Shuichi up to, will he have another attack that will land him in the hospital, go totally overboard??? what will happen next? Arrggg... pls, pls update quickly. OK, back to the review proper ... as usual your original characters are wonderful, very 3-D and real ... can imagine what a formidable woman Suguru's mum is just fr the reactions of Tohma & Kyosuke. The latter is really an adorable character whom I sure wld have made a great addition to the cannon itself! Also, nice to see that you're fleshing out Tohma and he's not just a manupulative chracter but does have a heart... his advice to Suichi was spot on. Great that he still has his sneaky and ever scheming side but I think this chapt shows that still waters really do run deep and he does have a caring side, and not just for Eiri. Thank you for this fic ... onward, your fans await!
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From ANON - Kibou32 on September 18, 2006
Hey... Thanks for updating quickly enough. I really like that chapter... but I also can't stop thinking about Ch. 4 and it came to me that if you had added that up at the beginning of the sequel, you'd had have to write about it in Realities of Life and Somewhere in Between as well as a source of some angst that you'd have to have the characters deal with it. So... anyway are you going to write about Tohma's reference as to why he let Shuichi try to seduce him? Are you going to let Eiri know about what "almost" happened between Tohma and Shuichi?

Keep on writing... If I get 3 more chapters in the course of this week, I'll write a review for each and every one of your chapters in Illusions of Life. Fair trade, don't you think?
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From ANON - bluesnake40 on September 18, 2006
This was another great chapt ... am a fan of Only the Ring Finger so was excited to read the cross over .. yes Yuichi/Wataru are such a great couple. Meanwhile, can't wait to see how Shuichi's meeting with Tohma will go and what happens when he goes off on tour. You've writing style has me totally captivated and can identify with the angst that poor Shuichi is going thru'. BTW, the addition of the cat is brilliant as are your other original characters. Here's hoping your next chapt will be updated soon.
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From ANON - Kibou32 on September 14, 2006
I really REALLY liked your story... actually I liked all 4 of them. Cheeky idea of moving the brief but definitely hot action between Tohma and Shuichi from Illusions of Life to Come What May... could you make an AU in which the fucking does happen? Not that I actually like this one... but the idea of Tohma wanting Shuichi at all when all over the manga and anime he is anything but interested is somewhat arousing. And I think in Come What May you should have Tohma's point of view of that particular instance when he was about to loose control and fuck Shuichi if Sakano-san hadn't come in when he had. Is Eiri going to find about that one?

Write some more. If you deliver 3 chapters by tomorrow, I may deliver more reviews in each of your stories...
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From ANON - Susana on September 04, 2006

...I can't believe you didn't get reviews. I usually don't review fanfics, but I have to tell you that for the longest time I've been following your story. You are the one to blame for me going to be extremely late reading your passionate writings.
You're the one to blame for being late to class after recess, you're the one to blame for cancelling my boyfriend to go out many times JUST to stay at home and read what I call "my favorite novel"

I honestly can say that after reading hundreds of Gravitation fanfics, yours is a thing to print out and make a book out of it.
It is my favorite, it is the funniest, it has made me cry, it has made me laugh, think, and adore the characters even more.
The manga and the cartoon are so far behind, I wish your story was the "real" one. I LOVE it, and I hope you can keep writing more with the help of your fellow friends.
I just recently found out about this third part "come what may" and I read it all in 2 days (i have THAT much free time)

I wish you the VERY best, I hope you can continue writing so that I can keep fantasizing. :) You keep my imagination alive, and you have made me see a very humane part in all of the characters, you reflect human nature in them, it's incredible. I loooooooooooove you.

The very best!

Chao :)

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From ANON - Maazka on August 30, 2006
OOO Im SO glad Despina.. I woulda died if you had taken it down. With all the switching and such of adultfanfiction.net , I ve been having a hard time finding all the stories I used to watch; so others are prolly too.
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From ANON - Meee! on August 30, 2006
I just wanted to let you know that I've been reading all of your stories for a couple of months now, and I cannot stop! I would probably die or something if you ever decided to take it off without completing it! You write beautifully and in WONDERFUL detail, and your sentences and paragraphs flow together without a flaw. I find myself agreeing and relating to the way each character acts, and every situation seems realistic and believable. Long story short, WONDERFUL work.
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From ANON - Daxemon on August 30, 2006
You are beyond awesome. I just finished your third installment Something in Between. I wish I was there from the beginning. The world that you created was so enticing that I was sucked in immediately and it made for an easier trip home on a crowded subway. I think you are so talented and skilled in creating your own universe with the Gravitation characters and altogether keeping them true to themselves and their added idiosyncrsies. Please continue with Come What May....I'm just now starting it... I hope that my review encourages you to keep on plugging away. Thanks for creating this epic.
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From ANON - Chikky on August 29, 2006
I love this story!! Do not take it down~ I'm just bad at reviewing... I'm sorry. But you have beautiful writing!! I cannot wait to read the next chapter!
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From ANON - Blue-eyes-green on August 28, 2006
*pokes head out from the rock she's been lurking under* I'm sorry I haven't reviewed- I love this story, as I've loved all of it's prequels. Your charecterization is excellent and I really like the way we flip between the variety of charecters viewpoints (although I also like the opposing single viewpoints in Illusions and Realities, they really worked for those fics). It's wonderful to find a fic that addresses just how messed up Eiri and Shuu's relationship is, and how much more messed up it could easily become. Of course, I'm still rooting for them to work it out and live... grumpilly ever after, till the end of their days. They are so totally co-dependent. I espcially loved Schuu's phone conversation with the threesome- it was funny and shed light on Schuu's mental state. I think Inoue is my favorite OC ever- he's so well rounded and fits into the rest of the cast so wonderfully that I sometimes forget that he is an OC- he fits perfectly into the messed up world of Gravitation and feels like a charecter who just gets forgotten a lot, like Rage, but a lot less annoying. (I admit I'm also kind of hoping that there will be another chapter dedicated to the threesome- those boys are hot! And I guess I'm also hoping to see just how Ryuu is messing with Tatsuah, although maybe not with how twisted your Ryuu is...) I also like the therapy scenes- it's good that you write those from the psychologist's perspective, because I don't know if they would work from eithere Schuu or Eiri's points of view, and it's also fun to see an "outsider's" point of view on that relationship. I guess what I'm trying to say is, please continue. It would make me very sad if this story stopped updating, and I promice I'll review...
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From ANON - Anon on August 28, 2006
Hi! I have enjoyed your stories and was so glad that you were continuing with the Epic of Life series. I can't wait to read each chapt and love how you capture the complex relationship between Shuichi & Eiri. They are both so in character and especially liked how you've given more depth to Shichi's character and we get to see his insecurities tied with his undying love for Eiri. Do continue and know you've made me a fan of your fics for life. Waiting eagerly for the next chapts.
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From ANON - maazka on August 22, 2006
w00t!! keep it coming sweety!
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From Blythe on July 15, 2006
I'm thrilled that there's another installment in this series! I'm anxious to see if Eiri and Shu can really work things out and how they both handle therapy! The entire series is excellent and just keeps getting better and better. I hope there's more soon!
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