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Reviews for Motoko’s Quest

By : Bishonen
  • From ANON - dark on January 14, 2007
    good story
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  • From ANON - Loving Servant to Overlord Pram on January 13, 2007
    A mutual friend showed me this fic...boy, this thing is a lot of fun to read! I haven't gotten very far in it, but I really like it. Can't wait to get to the Phantom Brave chapter!

    So you take requests? I would love to see a chapter with Pram from Makai Kingdom in it...you can include Nippon Ichi girls other than Motoko if you want, like Salome or someone from Disgaea or something, just as long as it has Pram in the spotlight and in charge! If I'm allowed to request specific details, I'd love to see her using her feet to do stuff...like, really using them, caressing Motoko with them instead of her hands, tweaking nipples with her toes, lightly scratching her pleasure zones with the nails, rubbing and inserting toes, the whole works. I know you do some foot stuff (foot stuff's how I met our friend), so I hope you'll consider this...not that I don't want to see the usual hands and tongues and all as well! Really, anything with Pram is great...it's so hard to find anything of her, and I feel desperate sometimes...sorry for the long review, I'm sure I'm boring you now! D:

    Oh, here's a picture that perfectly shows what I think Pram's dainty little feet's toes should look like...be warned, it's adult and it has a penis in it... http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/view/35182
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2007
    totally awsome story man
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2007
    hey its been a while since new chapter ur gona finish this right?
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  • From ANON - Tink's Lady on January 07, 2007
    THANK YOU!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2007
    this is always great, hey how about doing a chapter on chi-chi from dbz, shes a milf
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  • From ANON - I LOVE YURI! on December 30, 2006
    THAT. WAS. SO. AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you thank you thank you!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tia on December 30, 2006
    Wow that Phantom Brave chapter was so sweet I think it caused me to get a cavityand it was so hot that I think I need alo vera

    Tia The Sexy Slave
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  • From ANON - I LOVE YURI! on December 27, 2006
    Hey, you've done some great chapters where older women and younger girls get it on, but here's an idea for a twist: what if you did a chapter where the woman (20-40) lusts for and totally loves the younger girl (like 10-14), but can't take the knowledge that she does, and hates herself and denies it and rejects it? Motoko can help her come to grips with her love, but she can be reluctant at first and reject it, and motoko has to really work to get her to accept her feelings and confess them to the girl. Or maybe even show her firsthand that the girl likes, enjoys, and wants to be intimate with her?

    The only problem is that theres not really very many places you can find girls the right age...the Azumanga girls are just a little older than I think would be best for this idea (teens are at least a little acceptable socially)...you've already done Shinobu with others...maybe something like Pepita and Mirage in Star Ocean 3? Marona, Castile, and Sienna in Phantom Brave? Or Sakura and Sonomi (Tomoyo's Mom) in Card Captors? That one would really work well since Sonomi was already in love with Sakura's mom way back when.

    I really hope you take this request, I know you don't take them all but you take a lot of them and that's very good of you, I hope this is one that catches your eye!

    Oh yeah, hey, do you think maybe Motoko also loves Sabrina too? I mean I know she loves Suzuka, and that's really cool, they make a cute couple, good idea with that, but I think it seems kinda like she's in love with Sabrina as well and just doesn't know it...like Sabrina is just somehow a little more than a simple Mistress for Motoko and Suzuka...I dunno I'm just saying that if you're trying to work your way to that then you're doing a good job! Please keep writing! I'm sorry for the long review! Oh and I loved your Azumanga ficcy, thats what made me look at your author page and find this one!
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  • From ANON - Man in Tights on December 22, 2006
    I would love it if Motoko were to revisit Azumanga's world again and do something involving Yukari and Nyamo. She could bring them together, or they could include her in their fun as lovers, or if you wanted you could them doing something with Sakaki and Kagura, like Yukari and Nyamo wanting to trade their partners for a night just for everyone to see what it's like to have fun with a girl that's much older or much younger than you...anything! Of course that last idea's probably better as a separate story and not actually part of Motoko's Quest too, if you wanna do it that way. But I'm not picky, just show me Yukari and Nyamo, please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2006
    The Tokyo Mew Mew chapters were good, and I loved the last one of them!
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  • From ANON - Tia on December 13, 2006
    I think that you should do mint

    The Sexy Slave Tia
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  • From ANON - Tink's Lady on December 09, 2006
    Still need ideas for chapters, do you, well, there's always the one I've been asking for since the beginning...TINKERBELL! Fairy yuri is soooo sweet and cute, and she's the sexiest fairy ever!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2006
    Please no adult baby thing, yuck. You alienated enough raeders with the piss chapter as it is.

    Nice update btw.
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  • From ANON - Tia on December 07, 2006
    I wish you wolud do the Adult Baby thing with aoi you dont even have to have a meesy daiper scene I just want to see it Im ean you did the Renamon and mermaid things not to metion the chapter with piss Please think it over

    The sexy slave Tia
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