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Reviews for Motoko’s Quest

By : Bishonen
  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2006
    this needs a Incest tag in the description cuz of motoko and her hot sister geting it on

    hope u update soon

    i vote motoko finds her girlfriend soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 30, 2006
    did u end this?? thats to bad if u did
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2006
    Hey, this chapter looks much better. See, a little extra time really goes a long way. Now there's nothing to distract from the sexyness!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2006
    hot!!! like always
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2006
    when is next chapter??? plz hury
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  • From ANON - General Guisu on August 10, 2006
    This has some really hot ideas, and good taste in characters, but the writing style is only okay, and the bad grammar is really rampant through it. If you just cleaned it up a lot, maybe with a proofreader or something, then this could be more than just an amusing little guilty pleasure.

    Anyways, I'd like to see Renamon in it.
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  • From ANON - Gavaya on August 09, 2006
    Shiva! From Fainal Fantasy games! She and Motoko can have fun with ice "sculptures!"
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 08, 2006
    hey i love this fic yuri ftw, my fave chapter was with sabrina, i think u shoudl put her in it again, i wanna see her psychicly dominate more ladies!
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  • From ANON - Nifsara on August 08, 2006
    Sorry to hear about your writer's block...hope it ends soon! Heres my request...Motoko goes to the world of Chrono Trigger game and has fun with Schala and her mother Zeal who are secret lovers...ya its crazy but its HAWT! Oh and also count me as another vote for Motoko finding her love soon...
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2006
    this sotry is even better then ur shinobu one, and i love shinobu a LOT!! keep it up
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  • From ANON - Sharmista on August 05, 2006
    Yeah more chapters! Hope she finds her true love soon! Are you still taking requests? Do one with Relena from Gundam Wing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2006
    Hurray your back! can't wait for the next one
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2006
    This is cool, I also think I wanna see Motoko's girlfriend soon, also I have read your Exploaration fic, it was way hot for the most part, although I wish it had ended with Shinobu getting together with Motoko, that is one of my favorite pairings, but I guess if that happened then this fic wouldn't be possible so its all good!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2006
    nice story r u gonna make more of it
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  • From ANON - Shula on July 31, 2006
    How about a chapter with Chii from Chobits?
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