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Reviews for The Unexpected I

By : FAKEmpregnator
  • From ANON - A2M4snj on October 17, 2006
    here I was having a lousy day, and somehow you manage to slip two wonderful new chapters by me!! very well written. oh how I remember my first labor; believing the lie of "natural childbirth" being controlled simply by pant-blow breathing-HAH! For Child #2 I managed to get an epidural before my water broke, which was good, because he came in only 4 hours and was 2 pounds heavier than child #1! your story is just so very good, the science behind the male-carrier system very realistic.I really liked the transit strike plotline too. keep those chapters coming,please.:)
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  • From ANON - Sassenach on October 15, 2006
    I hope that I am invited to the party... DO NOT want to miss out on such a momentous occasion... I love this fic *Sigh*
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  • From ANON - A2M4snj on October 14, 2006
    this was a really well written chapter.you did a great job of covering alot of ground in a logical manner. I love how this secret is oh so close to slipping out! forget taking pics of Dee's face when he gets his ring; take pics of JJ when the poor guy finds out Dee's in a 'family way'! seriously, though,I'm delighted every time a new chapter gets posted. can't wait for christmas and the new years party!
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  • From ANON - Dk on October 14, 2006
    I have to say that I´m usually suspicious of mpreg-fics, I mean they´re mostly stupid and terribly written, so you can imagine I was very surprised to find a story about male pregnancy that is actually GOOD and believable. I started reading out of curiosity and I´m so glad I did it!
    I also loved the fact that you made Dee pregnant and not Ryo, this inversion of 'roles' made things even more interesting.
    I cannot wait to see JJ´s and the other guys reactions when the happy couple announce the good news.
    Thank you for writing,
    Hugs
    D
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  • From ANON - shiva45 on October 01, 2006
    Thank you Thank you. I am anticipating the next installment. Keep up the good work. HUGS!!!!!
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  • From ANON - rj1ofakind on September 30, 2006
    Were is an applause smiley when I need one? So easy to read and re-read here. Looking forward to more . . .

    rj1ofakind
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  • From ANON - Sally on September 29, 2006
    I'm so glad you updated! I've been looking nearly everyday. This is a great story, please keep it up!
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  • From ANON - shiva45 on September 22, 2006
    Please update. I love the fact that instead of Ryo being pregnant, you had the courage to make Dee the mother/father to be. I can't wait to read the next installment. Thank you for the wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - Ayeshagirl on September 01, 2006
    Well that took me a while to read!

    Now I must get back to sorting out my life... I hate tidying!

    Great chapter, you managed to reverese their roles but still keep them in character. I adore FAKE, and have read all the manga/seen the anime and this really could stand up as a another book!

    Ayeshagirl x
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  • From ANON - Sally on August 30, 2006
    god, I love this story.
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  • From ANON - Es on August 29, 2006
    OMG! Dee! Poor honey, someone save him? Soon, preferably? Update! You can't leave me like this!! Please? Sorry this is a crap review, but it's 12.30, very dark outside, and I have to get up in three hours. I couldn't not know what happens next!! I'm hoping you'll take pity and let me know what's going on- I'll be beack to r&r the next chapter!
    Es
    xx
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  • From ANON - Ayeshagirl on August 09, 2006
    Dee is so cute when he's vunerable!

    I love where you're going with this story, I read a similar one (well... vaguely) with Duo and Heero and this one looks to be just as interesting, if not more because I love FAKE!

    Keep up the good work.

    p.s. as for the child thing, it depends on how i feel at the end of the story and whether it should end there or if it still seems unfinished.
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  • From ANON - Bluesnake40 on August 03, 2006
    am not a fan ofmpeg fics but am glad I decided to read this. it's certainly well written and believable, with both Ryo & Dee being in character. Especially liked the fact that you made Dee the pregnant one rather than Ryo. Can hardly wait for the next chapts.
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  • From ANON - sassenach on August 03, 2006
    Its just like sugar... it's sweet and always leaves you craving for more...
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  • From ANON - Ayeshagirl on July 31, 2006
    Heh... that was cute! And well written. It made me forget that I was hungry.. heh
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