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Reviews for The Unexpected I

By : FAKEmpregnator
  • From ANON - Sol_Luna1 on March 31, 2008
    I LOVED "The Unexpected I" I admit I was hesitating to read about a pregnant man but It just made me Love the Dee/Ryo characters even more.
    I became a FAKE fan some years back after getting ahold of the Mangas. I was dissapointed that it ended on book 7. I wrote a lot of little scripts and stories to contuniue it on my own but they were just for me to read. just recently maybe a month ago I was flipping through channels and FAKE the Animie was on! I had totally forgot that there was an Animie and when I did know of it i thought it was just in Japanese. This started me to google trying to find the dvd's from the Animie series. While I was searching, I came upon the FanFiction.net and to my utter joy! a FAKE fanfic commuity! that lead to the Live Journals and AdultFanFiction.net.
    I read all 26 chapters of The Unexpected I and just finished all 15 of Unexpected II (Im hooked!) and Im so glad that there are a group of people out there keeping FAKE Dee/Ryo and the characters alive!!

    Your stories of Dee and Ryo have kept me ooohing and ahhing so much I cant wait for the Chibi to be born!!, im glad you are extending it though almost going day by day because it just makes it all the more exciting! Looking forward to more of your fabulous saga!! :)

    Your New Fan

    Sol_Luna1
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  • From ANON - Jaugi on March 20, 2008
    I loved this Fic! I'll admit that I was a bit skeptical about having Dee be the pregnant one because like you said: everyone normally would picture Ryo being that one but after reading it I couldn't help but fall in love with it. I'm starting the second one and I can only hope there will be a third. You rock keep up the great work! ^-^
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  • From animekid on February 02, 2008
    whoa dee's preggers!

    I love the touching scenes and Ryo knocking the shit out of Rose! Ahahahhahaahhah!

    man this story is so much like the manga :)
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  • From animekid on February 02, 2008
    interesting concept!

    reading this thing all over again because I forgot my place last time!

    still a wonderful story through and through
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  • From TrulyWished on September 30, 2007
    Took a few days but I made it through! Very well written and I enjoyed it immensely. I'm heading over to give #2 a shot now. Keep up the good work!
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  • From Eltemerion on March 12, 2007
    Have I told you what a sheer genius I think you are?! ^^ I just finished Chapter 25 and am really sorry for forgetting to review the previous ones. I like how you took your time with the party and setting the mood. It was torture for me as a reader but it really did help build the anticipation and I would not have wanted it any other way. A brilliant story so far which I can't wait and at the same time dread getting to the end of. Thank you for all the effort you've put into this!
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  • From scriobhannsi on January 20, 2007
    This story is well thought out in regards to story and believability. While improbible in real life, the science behind "carriers" is vaguely plossible from my unscientific background. It isn't the radiation excuse. *grins*

    The character interaction is good (chapter 1 with the Dee and Ryo find out and in 24 between JJ and drunk!Ryo, drake & JJ), but it does have room for improvement such as Chapter 26 with the multiple use of "babe" and "baby" during the scene where Dee and Ryo are eating. When I compare the series to this story, I think JJ could be a little more stable--he seems a trifle too... obtuse and manic. That may be my own impression of JJ, but I've always invisioned him as a plotter with nerves of steel. Yes, he is a bit manic in 1 on 1 scenes with Dee, but I account that to him not having to worry about other things happening. Diana and the Chief I believe are the two most accurate characters so far to the manga. Rose wavers between dead-on and slightly...too understanding or off. I'm chalking that up to the story topic of mpreg.

    The story balance is nice, but I'm having trouble with the "understanding happy couple" that appear in Vince and David. They have the feel of the nice, supportive, understanding perfect people of the story which make things a little too pat for my taste. However, Vince is well thought out and a very likable character. I think he is great as Dee's doctor, but I think I would like to see Vince and David continue to be background characters in this soon-to-be series rather than on equal par with the 27th crew and co. Even though it's nice to bring in nifty new characters, I think the present focus--the changes in Ryo and Dee's relationship, their view of themselves, and family dynamic makes for a better story in the long run. Admittedly, there is only so much expounding one can do on that as a story progresses, but there are also the inevitible changes that the 27th is going to face with Ryo and Dee being "out" as a couple as well as partners. There are also the relationships hinted at in "Like, Like, Love" which will make for interesting fodder as this story progresses through the wedding and birth of Dee and Ryo's child.

    I look forward to The Unexpected II with fingers crossed! This has been one of the stories that has kept me coming back to AFF again and again, and I can't wait to read the next portion of this story.
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  • From Travellyr on January 15, 2007
    ::helpless SNICKERING:: Oh, my dear, that was wonderful. The idea of Jim with a video camera just sent me over the edge into dancing and giggles. Congratulations on this! You've made something nice and sweet... so sweet I have to be in the mood for it, because whenever I get to reading this, I binge! (which is why it's four in the morning, and I meant to be asleep four hours ago...)

    I also liked JJ, and his reactions, and what went with that, and Ryo being DRUNK and hugging everyone. Not outright plastered, but certainly quite far from sober!

    ^^ Thanks again for sharing.
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  • From ANON - RaiL on January 14, 2007
    I just read Chapter 18 and am loving your attention to detail. I really like how you give vivid descriptions of everything. It certainly helps set the mood and makes your story very engaging. ^_^ Everytime I read another chapter everything that blew me away in the previous chapters does it all over again. XD I'm in such a Squeeeeee mood right now I don't think I'm making any sense. XD
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  • From ANON - RaiL on January 13, 2007
    I've just read chapter 17 and you've successfully turned me into a happy pile of mush. That was soooo sweet and a wonderful read as always! ^_^
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  • From ANON - RaiL on January 11, 2007
    Chapter 15 and I'm as hooked as ever. You've written chapter after wonderful chapter of one of the hardest to write genres ever and it's left me pretty speechless when it comes to compliments. Great job!
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  • From ANON - moontatoo on January 09, 2007
    a truely lovely story, and I cannot wait for the next installment. The second half should be just as wonderful as the first . Thank you for the way you handled the Big News being delivered to my little JJ. Hope to see a friendship develope between he and Ryo soon ? Thank you for sharing this story with all of us.

    moon
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  • From ANON - c.l on January 09, 2007
    Hi! Just wanted to say that this is one of the best mpreg stories I've ever read!! I love that Dee is the one who is pregnant and that you've really explained how come men can get pregnant. Please keep it up! LoL c.l
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  • From ANON - Mazy3261 on January 07, 2007
    Wow! I'm so glad you're updating so fast! Reading your new chapters just makes my day.
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  • From ANON - RaiL on January 06, 2007
    Just read chapter 11 and I love how very sweet everything is getting!~ ^__^ There are more and more "Aww" moments!
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