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Reviews for The Trinket

By : hawker748
  • From ANON - volosaraptor on January 10, 2014
    Loved the story i beleve it is one of those where although its a single chaptor story there is lots of potential for it to be a multipule chaptor story so i guess wat i am sayin is i hope u decide to continue it im sure there are a lot of poleople out there that eould agree
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  • From haruharaharu on February 05, 2008
    I consider this story to be the premiere one-shot in this section. Very well written, the content is good and sexy, and the characters are all great. I really can't find any real criticisms for this story other than the stupid pendant thing which, of course was just a tool to enable the good parts. Not really a problem.
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  • From stitchx626rr on May 17, 2007
    Damn, that was hot. Awesome story.
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  • From chibinari on January 17, 2007
    this one is a sexy one..i must say your work never fail to fascinate me and always leave me wanting for more..motoko,tsuruko and keitaro threesome eh..i admit i sometime doesn't like a threesome or more fic but your work is an exception i guess mostly because i agree with how the setting in this story should be done and you write so well that i could just agree with how you think haha..good one hawker..well i should say i love motoko/keitaro pairing but i'm sure with your writing skill i'll also would come to love the idea of kitsune/keitaro..keep writing great fics..
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  • From ANON - Scyggy on December 15, 2006
    Awesome... nice threesome. That last part really made me laugh ^^
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  • From ANON - ace8488 on December 05, 2006
    WOW! I bow before the master! *lays face down on the ground* This was amazing!....WOW....just....wow.
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  • From ANON - laz Kairu sama on October 03, 2006
    lol enjoyed your comment at the end there although I don't really agree lol. Quite good though. Your imagery skills are second to none. I've also always liked the pairing of MotokoxKeitaro. I don't normally read hentai, but I admit I liked reading this one. I liked the whole morning after thing as well lol. I kinda thought you might have Keitaro go off, find the pendant, and try and use it on Naru at the end there though lol. That could be a good idea for a sequal though, but anyway great story. If you don't mind though could you read mine and give me a review. It's Kiba under Love Hina. I would greatly appreciate it and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - basteng on September 05, 2006
    whew...man that was hot!!...LOL...very well written as usual...i would like to request a sequel or a continuation to this fic if you have the time....ty
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  • From ANON - Church on August 17, 2006
    This is some good ass sexy stor thngy here man I love it! If the Aoyama sisters Mom went there oh man it would be
    kinda great but Keitaro would probably drained of jis life force but at least he would get some with them.
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  • From ANON - Ecchi-ANBU on August 17, 2006
    I really liked this one!
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  • From Neferius on August 13, 2006
    Rx7 seriously wanted you to include their mother...I don't know if Keitaro could handle three Aoyama's since one is hard enough. Nice work.
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  • From ANON - RAW19 on August 09, 2006
    you talent knows no bounds. this was another excellent fic.
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  • From ANON - Fenrir on August 08, 2006
    Again, you've out done yourself Hawker. I love this Love Hina fic. You seem to do so well with bringing out the sexuality of the characters. Thanks for the plesure of reading this and keep writing. Again what are you going to do with Loss and Redemption 2? I am sitll waiting for that next update. Thanks hawker for writing, Love Hina is one of my favorite Manga's ever. And Keitaro and Motoko pairings are so cool...becuse I love Motoko!
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  • From Bishonen on August 08, 2006
    Wow that was great I mean that was just plain WOW I'm not sure what to say other than you have some serious talent

    With love; Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - benn454 on August 08, 2006
    Keitaro! That lucky bastard! Another resounding success IMO, hawker. It's a mark of a good author to keep the material fresh and interesting, even though it's familiar territory. I guess I will retract my previous statement about Blizzard being too short now lol. Though please, for the love of God, finish Loss and Redemption 2!! Keep up the good work!
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