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Reviews for Keep Your Enemies Closer

By : darlingdali
  • From nomy on February 05, 2008
    imagine that!!..a slash on a girl manga that i love and i do sometimes think Ryoki is a jerk and Hatsumi should be with Azusa or Shinogu..but wow..the pairing!! i can imagine it already if it is drawn in the real manga...!! total hotness and full with angst!...pure love your story..!! hope somebody else with do more slash on this pairing!!!
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  • From ANON - dimonyo-anghel on October 22, 2006
    I love it!! I'm happy for Shingou and Azusa!! I kept becoming annoyed every time one of them thought the other loved Hatsumi *bleh*
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  • From ANON - R.M. moeru on October 15, 2006
    that was really good. this is the first fanfic about manga characters that i actually finished. thanks! keep up the good work, hope to see you published soon.
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  • From ANON - JenJen on September 25, 2006
    Ok,
    Thats the ending this story needed. Thank you so much for such a hot andsweet story. look what you did ... you made me all waffy ...
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  • From ANON - JenJen on September 22, 2006
    You are made of evil, evil and awesomeness. You cant seriously end it like that! I want more !!!!! I need more, in fact i DEMAND more!
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  • From ANON - aninsomniac on September 19, 2006
    Wow, naisu ending! I love that the twists were simple stuff. No rambling he-loves-me, loves-me-not stuff. So easy to fall into that trap. And I do *adore* the way Shin tries to seduce the answers out of Azusa. Very wicked Shin, we have here! Kudos to the author. Hope you write more~
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  • From ANON - JenJen on September 19, 2006
    You! Woman! Gaaaaaahhhh you almost gave me a heart attack when he was eves dropping >.
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  • From ANON - JenJen on September 04, 2006
    Ok, read chapter 6. now thats what i was talking about! perfect angst / emotional entanglements damn you for writing so well >.
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  • From ANON - Blue November on September 03, 2006
    Another great chapter!!! very buttery! loved it!!
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  • From ANON - Blue November on August 28, 2006
    wow! i never thought i could be so aroused at the thought of two men together but...hot damn! More!!! I want MORE!!!! it was buttery!! (finger wiggle)
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  • From ANON - aninsomniac on August 24, 2006
    Hi! I never usually read shoujo-originated slash fics, but got into this one with the promise of an 'extremey hot' fifth chap. lol. And boy, it was something! I like how you build the emotions of the characters and the very logical if let-me-knuckle-him-a-bit kind of misunderstanding breeding between Asuza and Shinogu. The smex is VERY HOT. Loved it. And REALLY REALLY hope that there would be more of it. It's always sad when a shoujo manga ignores the 'other' party/parties in a love triangle/quadrangle/orgyfest, especially when they happen to be sexy bishies. I love it, please write more.
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  • From ANON - Rina on August 23, 2006
    Nice start. Everything's really good and the dialogue is awesome. I'll review the other chapters later. Banzai! ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2006
    Great Story, needs more porn though....
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