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Reviews for Deliverance

By : blood-and-lust-87
  • From Ximchan on April 11, 2016
    Great story. Some more chapters would be grately appreciated
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  • From ANON - thothgoddess567 on November 18, 2007
    that was so good i just wish the sex scene would have had more detail in it.
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  • From Kichi on July 10, 2007
    I liked it but I really doubt Mugen could do anything of the sort after what happened in the ;last eps. They were both laid out for a week..
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  • From Kichi on July 10, 2007
    I love it so far!
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  • From ANON - Tammi on December 09, 2006
    Lovely and hot! :)
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  • From thebigW on November 29, 2006
    I think it's been a year or more since I've read any of your work, and wow! You've improved so much with setup, detail, dialog, and your flow... the list goes on. Your Mugen was simply marvelous. Fuu was quite good as well, with so many emotions, yet such determination, given her decision. Your hard work really shows, and I hope to read more in the future.

    Ja.

    W.
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  • From ANON - R.O.W.R. on November 27, 2006
    i think my name pretty much says it all :)
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  • From ANON - oyuki on November 15, 2006
    sounds good. please have more soon.
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 16, 2006
    Hey, I think this is a great start. You write really well! Please continue your Fuugen-ness!
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  • From ANON - Mii on August 11, 2006
    Hahaha! Fiirst review!
    Annyyhow. O, pretty begining.
    Descriptive and I could picture it in my head, even if I already saw that 25th episode.
    Duuddee. I'm jealous of you. I'm way too shy to be writing lemons and stuff. But I'll have to get over it, I might have to be writing one soon. Dammit. Ugh.
    Anyway. I still love that fact that even though Mugen came for her, he's all like, "RUN BITCH! GODDAMN!"
    Ho, I almost busted out laughing.
    Anyways, nice story and favorited/alerted and stuff.

    .Mii!
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  • From ANON - TAK on August 11, 2006
    This particular scene could've easily been written cheesy. But, I think you portrayed it wonderfully between Mugen and Fuu without making it too mushy, which really contributed to the tension of the situation. Please continue, you've done a great job so far!
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  • From ANON - lil_merc_girl on August 11, 2006
    i like it so far. that was also my favorite episode. i can't wait for the second part of this. mugen and fuu.. yay!!!!
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  • From ANON - anonamoose on August 11, 2006
    want you to continue? hell yeah you gotta continue! i cant wait for the next part! i certainly hope you update this soon
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  • From ANON - prinlita on August 10, 2006
    I really like your start, and I love the promise of a good mugenfuu fic. Keep going and I look foreword to your next update.
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