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Reviews for Working out the Paradox

By : chayron
  • From SorceressFujin on November 12, 2006
    This story just gets better and better, I am very anxious to see the next chapter! I hope you get it out very soon. :)
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  • From ANON - goldfish_777 on October 31, 2006
    Hi...I really enjoy reading your writing and character development of Wolfram. I look forward to reading the next chapter(s).
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  • From ANON - lad on October 26, 2006
    I like the way you take everything steadily. I'm already bored with the plot "Yuuri realizes he fall in love with Wolfram after 1, he see someone with Wolf , 2, he suddenly see Wolf in a new light ( a sexy light, exactly >_< ) 3, (the worst ) an accident caused by some freaky perfume. They love each other, indeed, not are temped just by bodies. And love need time.
    About your idea : "I surely didn’t plan that far ahead in the story, but my characters [bitches!] do most of things without telling me that beforehand, and the maturing is clearly seen, and it will be much of it in this chapter." I like the part the character is maturing. I can understand you let your characters do like who they are. But don't let they OOC too far, ok? ^_^

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  • From ANON - Chrono_ofDarkness on October 25, 2006
    Yay! a new chapter! I love the way you describe water and the spirit of those who are strong enough to make a contract with it. Awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - MsMina on October 25, 2006
    Very nice plot and character development in this chapter. I enjoyed getting to know a little more about what's happening with everyone. Though it didn't seem like Yuri had settled all that much about what is bothering him, but I understand why you wanted Yuri to head back to the castle unexpectedly. Only to discover that Wolfram has left with the other man for at least a month. Oh that will definitely be an interesting conversation to see. I look forward to seeing what will happen next.
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  • From ANON - KaraQ on October 25, 2006
    Thank you for answering (I love when authors do that) :-)
    Lol. Actually I avoid PWP too. I hate when there's no plot and I much prefer the well-written tension (both sexual and otherwise) between Yuuri and Wolfram in your fic. XD
    Yay, taverns, and I was pleasently surprised to hear that Kyota and Wolfram didn't do erh.. the hanky-panky. Yuuri may be a wimp, but I prefer to think of him as Wolf's wimp. And vice versa ^^
    oh, and I adore you writing long chapters as well. Thank you!

    ~KaraQ
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  • From SorceressFujin on October 25, 2006
    Great chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - inulp on October 21, 2006
    Wow! Great chapter!!! I loved it. Kyouta (sp?) is an asshole but it is understandable on why he acts like that. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter. I'll be waiting paitently! See ya. (Please tell me when you update! ^-^)
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  • From ANON - chrono_ofDarkness on October 16, 2006
    Thank you so much for updating! I can't wait for the next one!
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  • From SorceressFujin on October 11, 2006
    Excellent story so far! I am enthralled! I hope you update again very very soon, I cannot wait. :)
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  • From ANON - anonymous on October 11, 2006
    I love this story. when I first started it (long time ago) I thought that with all the angst the engagement would be broken right at the initial dance. But this is soooo much better. I don't think it's too much angst and depressing. They are just hmmmmmm.... mature- that's it. Also it's kind of funny. Yuuri being jealous it too amuzing the way it's writte in this story. I mean Shori is right. Wolfram in this story deserves better than a sudden "You are so attractive I'm taking you now". So really I don't mind waiting it out for the smut or even just fluff. (now what I would loooooooooooove is for Yuuri to get back and start courting Wolfram properly :)-but I'm running away with myself!)
    Thanks for taking the time to write!
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  • From ANON - Enzeru on October 10, 2006
    I'm really excited to find out what happens next! excited and impatient lol. but i'll wait, because i love this fic so much!!
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  • From ANON - KaraQ on October 10, 2006
    Somehow this fic is somehow getting more and more depressing (*dies from all the angst*). Can there really be a happy ending?!...and smut?
    Both the characters are really growing in their own way, and that's really awesome. I dunno; Yuuri should, on his travel, see some boyonboy action, get drunk and be flirted with or something. We like yaoi, so he should too. ^^ Lol.
    I do hope Wolf will continiue being in love with Yuuri, though. And yes, I AM praying for an happy ending...and smut. Yay.
    I'm curious to see what the next chapter will be about, so please update soon! ^^

    ~KaraQ
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  • From ANON - inulp on October 04, 2006
    Wow, all action at the end, it was great! Although what Shori said to Yuuri is definetely something to think about. Please e-mail me when you update again, and I changed it, if you can tell... ^-^ Hope to see more action and gore!! lol See ya.
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  • From ANON - toshimalfoy on October 04, 2006
    Yay!
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