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Reviews for Working out the Paradox

By : chayron
  • From ANON - ~anz~ on August 29, 2006
    Ok..you got me hooked!~_^!

    The scene at the lake was nice and I understand Yuuri was just a little ticked at the soldiers for leering at Wolfram. Who could blame him! And the tender way he took care of Wolfie after the sword bit him...something is there. Whether he wants to admit it or not.

    I understand Wolfram's frustration... and trepidation...his feeling of foreboding as to how his life is gonna change after the birthday ball, but hasn't it changed already, because of the slap? Maybe they need to get caught out in the rain more often. Maybe that will soften Yuuri's heart towards him... or will he just be doomed...stuck in a onesided relationship... suffering with a bad case of unrequited love...because he fell for Yuuri... hard!

    All in all I find I like the characters and the story...but I hate that damn pink gown! It makes him all frilly and girly and I don't think it helps his cause... but...he is cute and has a great personality...and that character may hopefully help him win the day...or not! well... here's to you Wolfram...at least he thought well enough of you to bandage your hand...Lot's of TLC there!~_^!
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  • From ANON - green on August 27, 2006
    more soon please. :)
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  • From leiachan on August 18, 2006
    I love that chapter just like the first one. Really - I just love yuuram ^-^
    And Yuuri trying to make a face like Gwendal - i really can imagine that - it's just too funny.
    But the best thing was the kiss - so sweet. I just love both of them.
    Btw, what's your first language? And how did you get to speak such a good English? Honestly, I'm getting envious.

    greetings, leia
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  • From ANON - ~anz~ on August 18, 2006
    well you've done it...again! gotten me interested in a fic.

    it's strange... i have never heard of this anime until now and whoa! i am hooked! can't get enough of it!

    you really make the reader care about the characters. they are neither flat nor one dimensional.

    thank you so very much. i now have a new fic to read, a new set of characters to care about and a new universe to enjoy. ~_^!
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  • From ANON - TwilightFlower on August 17, 2006
    I love your story so far. It's good that you are giving Yuri the chance to work through all of his feelings. PLus, it's good that Wolfram is learning to back off just a bit and give Yuri some space. Your English is actually pretty good most of the time, but I'll beta read for you, if you would like. If you're interested, email me at rivendellwarrior@yahoo.com. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - leia on August 15, 2006
    Since I'm not a native speaker either I haven't noticed any weird expression or mistakes... So I'm gettin kind of jealous. Your writing is really good.
    It's really nice that the story does not advance too fast. Most Yuuram stories are starting right away with those two going fluffy. Not that I would complain about it. But it is nice to read something different.
    I really like to know how you will make Yuuri gay. So, hope you will write and upload the next chapter soon.

    greetings, leia

    ps: Conrad, Yozak and Adelbert... a threesome? (Well... there are things... uah... Conrad and Yozak - okay, but... Adelbert?!)
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  • From ANON - MasterLenx on August 11, 2006
    YAY!! I am the first to review! *feels honored* well, I liked this one. Very descriptive - and didn't just shoot into 'Yuri-realizes-he-loves-Wolf' technique. I grow tired of the same plot! lol... but hey, yours is great! And I hope you update soon! ^_^

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