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Reviews for Working out the Paradox

By : chayron
  • From ANON - CluelessIdiot on December 29, 2006
    Yuuri: Wolfram!

    Wolfram: What? I leaving you already so u don't have to worry about marrying me!

    Yuuri: Well I like you! ...but i'm not gay...so until i make up my mind i'm keeping u in my closet.

    Wolfram: so when will i get out of the closet.

    Yuuri: Don't worry probably within our lifetimes.

    Wolfram: ...
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  • From ANON - mizu-majutsu on December 29, 2006
    Hi! I really love this story of yours so much! I do hope you get to update it soon and finish it up. I really want to find out how Yuuri would be able to convince Wolfram that he indeed loves him and all that stuff.

    Your work is amazingly well written. Except for a few typos and grammatical inconsistencies (which doesn't affect the story in any way anyway, so who cares! I certainly don't! :D) it's just a perfect story that celebrates the love between the two royalties.

    I do hope you get to update this soon! I am looking forward to it. I'd also love to get to read some more of your works. You're an amazing writer. :)


    Stay cool,

    Chai aka mizu-majutsu
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  • From ANON - Ashley on December 29, 2006
    Must have mooore!
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  • From SorceressFujin on December 29, 2006
    Excellent chapter, as always! I am very eager to see the next! Hmm... I could see Yuri getting really jealous and end up kissing Wolfram; almost surprised he didnt in this chapter. :P
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  • From ANON - Enzeru on December 28, 2006
    awwww the poor boys. i wish they could convey their feelings properly instead of fighting : (

    good job, i cant wait for more!
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  • From ANON - KaraQ on December 28, 2006
    Hi there! :-)
    Remember me? i'm really sorry I haven't reviewed for a long time, but I've been ill for a long time now. Sorry, I'll make it up to you, kay?!
    Hmm... I must say that I'm starting to feel the teensiest bit sorry for Yuuri. I don't know why, really. Must be because I'm a Yuuram fan deep down, and hate to see them fight (The tension is so thick during their fight. ^o^ How on Earth do you write scenes like that?!) I'm glad that he's starting to realise his feeling for Wolf, but not yet acting them out. NO ONE just goes; "Oh, I kinda find you attractive now, so lets have sex and get married". And marriage at such a young age. No wonder if he's kinda freaked ot. Btw, IF/(when) Yuuri accepts his future in Shin Maokoku, will he age 'naturally' as any other demon?
    And I'm really glad you decided to explore his powers some more. After all, he still has a 'dark side'as the Demon King. He's not only a wimp. XD
    As for Wolf; Noooo...don't decide to marry Kyota. BAD WOLFY! ..Sniff...
    You are still the best KKM author out there, and I continue to enjoy your story. Plese update soon.

    ~KaraQ
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on December 20, 2006

    Wonderful story, Chayron! This is my first time reading a Kyou Kara Maoh fanfiction story; I enjoyed it very much. I also look forward to the next update. As usual I love your writing style. The way you open up the development and the character insights are really captivating! Keep up the great work.


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  • From ANON - Ashley on December 19, 2006
    I really love this story. I have been reading it for hours, I just couldn't stop! I must have more!
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  • From ANON - chrono_ofdarkness on December 16, 2006
    Yay! That was so cute. lol. Yuri's reactions have to be the most adorable thing ever. lol. I know I sound like a fangirl, but it was just so cute. His blush at the end made me squeal like a middle school fangirl.lol. Can't wait for the next one.
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  • From SorceressFujin on December 16, 2006
    Excellent chapter! (again!) Would have reviewed sooner, but our power has been out. (damn wind. XD)
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  • From ANON - blumar on December 16, 2006
    Hi ya! Another fantastic chapter...*eyes shimmering with tears of joy*. And longer too! :D I actually read this yesterday but just when I went to review it was time for AdultFanfic to backup! Grrr. So I turned off the computer and went to bed. But today I must review your fabulous Story! But there is one thing I have to ask, when in chapter 12 or 13, I think, when Yuri noticed the hickeys on Wolfrem and got really angry, Yuri didn't encase him in that water bubble? It was just how they were weirdly transported to Earth? In which Yuri did and not the Great Sage? He could do that? I haven't watched the whole Anime here and I was also wondering, has Yuri ever tried to teach Wolfrem how to play baseball? That would be funny LoL ;D
    By the by, I do write fanfics, but only Hellsing at the moment. I've noticed there is no Full Metal Alchemist fanfics on adultfanfic!!!! Shock, horror, depravity!!!! So I might just have to write one for that. But mostly I write my own works of fiction. I would love to write a Kyo Kara Maoh fic but I think I haven't watched enough of the anime and I only have up untill chapter Five on the manga.
    With the girl thing...oh so thats why LoL. I suppose not many guys can take it..cough cough..;D
    You write DBZ TOO!!! O_O who are your pairings? Where are your stories???? Must know! Must read more of your work!!!!! Till you update again!!!!!
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on December 16, 2006
    wow i hope the time on earth will yuur time to see what wolfram have to get to him .. the chapter was good and yuur is getting feeling for wolfram. but wolfram is notget it . can not wait for next chapter . up date soom.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on December 16, 2006
    Another great chapter! I love how fast you update and I can't wait for the next one! But those two need to make up already so they can start talking about their own relationship! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Aindel on December 16, 2006
    This is absolutely wonderful. I've been reading for a while now, but from the dark recesses of the silent world. I love what you've done. A feasable idea, actual PLOT, promise of man-sex (YAY!), and reasoning!
    I think you can make this work, really. I mean, it's a lot like FAKE (if you've read it). Actually, I read a fic for that once where Ryo was explaining his sexual orientation. He said he wasn't gay, but could be described as "Dee-sexual," because he loves Dee no matter what his gender. It just took him a while to accept that in himself.
    Same idea, different fandom. I love your original characters, too (which is not normal for me). Please keep up the magnificent work!
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  • From ANON - blumar on December 15, 2006
    sob..sob..sob...you have to write more..hipcup..sob...I need more!Too short! Too short! Damn this is a great story!
    But your message to me, man that was long! I loved it and agree with you 100% You can complain and whine to me all the time luv, like I said , I fullheartedly agree with you! Those people on fanfic.net argh! Words can not describe how some of them irratate me with their spelling, using there, insted of their, or wear insted of were or where! You've got me complaining now! But I totally agree with you on MSExplorer too, I despise, no loathe the thing too! I use Mozilla though, eh, it gets me by.
    Oh and in regards to ya story, I am a really, really a fast reader and with your story I just couldn't stop reading!! My eyes just flew wanting more and more! So good, so good, I was growling and bitting peoples head's off who had disturbed me while I was reading! Honestly! (Your story is involved, don't be modest now! or maybe I'm just reading too much of that crap on fanfic.net with everyone out of character and absolutly no plot and always demanding reviews? But your story fantastic! everyone is SO in character and there's hardly any mistakes!)but I would say on average for reading your story so far it would probably take about 8-9 hours without breaks maybe for the average person? Maybe?
    Anyway me stop blabbering on in this review, you just keep writing and update soon. I've put my email down if you want to contact me further. But you just UPDATE! (I am a girl by the way, most people first think I'm some guy. Shivers, god that is scary..)
    Till your next chapter in which I am anxiously awaiting!
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