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Reviews for Femininity

By : artemisgirl
  • From ANON - saeki on October 09, 2006
    Awwww This's LOVEABLE!!
    I like the way you write it. How cute!!
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  • From ANON - kitkat on October 05, 2006
    ahahahahahaha yay smex.
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  • From Hasu on September 26, 2006
    This is great! I just love how L plays with Raito [did I spell that right?] He's very convincing isn't he? Great work. >^__^
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2006
    haha that was great. more please!
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  • From ANON - Lodrelhai on September 03, 2006
    This is a damn good piece. I love, absolutely, love, the mindgame, and I can see L doing exactly that! Shame on Light for making assumptions! At least he got over it quickly.

    Gramatical suggestion - careful of adverb overuse and run-on sentences. The first sentence in this could easily have been two, maybe even three. I almost stopped reading right there, which would have been a real shame. This is too good a story to have that kind of first impression!

    Great job again!
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  • From ANON - aces and spades make the best weapons on August 30, 2006
    oh. my. that was aces! lubbed itright til the end, and i wanted more...lol ^_^ superb!
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  • From ANON - sexypancake on August 29, 2006
    this was really funny. about halfway through i was trying to imagine L in dresses and such... heh. loved it!
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  • From ANON - dark_Angel on August 23, 2006
    LOL ahahahaha yeah that was funny =P although it's pretty impossible to perceive L as a girl, he did raise some interesting issues. And I think you captured L's personality really well, although Raito was a bit OOC. good job! =)
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  • From ANON - The Mad Butterfly on August 23, 2006
    Omg! for a sec there I really thought you were going to make him a girl...either way I will always love L ...but MAN!!! T_T its a one shot... i want mooooorrrreeeeeeeeeeee...!!!!!!!

    I hope you update more Light/L stories...^_^
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