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Reviews for Gravity...

By : ainy1985
  • From ANON - Ace on September 05, 2006
    Now I am not saying I am a perfect writer either but, I have to agree this story is pretty hard to fallow. I am sure you had good thoughts and tried hard its just Its hard to fallow. When you say Pan do you mean Penis? Or Pants? I was just wondering otherwise keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - Susana on September 05, 2006


    ...nice story but you should really try to put some spaces between "paragraphs"
    It is

    REALLY hard to read.

    Otherwise..good job!
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